j'adoube: Kriegspiel (chapter 2)

[sharlot1926]

Dean's panicked eyes dulled as he sagged, spaghetti-limp in his father's arms.

Comments

[jpgr]

Ooh, the plot thickens! I like how you've taken the route that they've always been on Divine radar. He's been touched but not used - at least not this time. Counting down to Sunday

[sharlot1926]

Yes, yes...I always liked the idea of Dean being every bit as "touched" by Heaven as Sam was by Hell. So, here I really toy with that idea...well that, and I really wanted John and Sam to get an outside view of Dean's ferocious loyalty...but like you said...all that has to wait until Sunday. ;)

Thanks so much, hon.

Kat

[sharlot1926]

Yep...Dean wakes up next chapter. I had a lot of fun writing it, so I hope it hits the spot. :)

Thanks much, hon!

Kat

[tifaching]

Missouri needs to be smacked with a spoon for issuing a warning that's incomprehensible to anyone who doesn't play chess and then getting frustrated when she's not understood. *Disclaimer: Just to be clear, I love the way you've written her. I am not a fan of Missouri in general, I think you've captured her perfectly here.*

It is interesting that heaven went to all the trouble of creating this new existence for Dean and left the memories of those who knew him before intact. Can't wait to see how that plays out. I have to wait til Sunday now for him to wake up? Sadist. :)

[sharlot1926]

Hahaha...Missouri is definitely a "small doses" kind of character. Don't worry, though...this is her one and only appearance. And I think John can handle her. ;)

Yeah, you know, I always liked the idea of Dean being of particular interest to "Heaven" as Sam was to Hell. So this is me playing around with that idea. Well, you know...that and it gives me the opportunity to torture poor Dean. Hee!

Thanks so much, T! Yep...Dean wakes up next chapter. Sorry for the cruel delay. :P

Kat

[lidia1991_an]

Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's not Sunday yet?????

[sharlot1926]

Hehe...not quite yet...but it's not far away. :)

/hugs

Kat

[taylorariel]

"This whole thing sucks." Yeah it does. But this story doesn't!! I love this and I am intrigued where it is leading. Grateful for the update- and the work that went into it- and I wait patiently for the next one. Thank You.

[sharlot1926]

Thanks so much, Taylorariel. I appreciate it so much. Yeah, this is a bit of a mystery that will unravel slowly...but I always loved the idea of Dean being on the Heaven's "radar"...so this is my take on it.

Update coming soon. Take care. :)

Kat