jai guru deva om: come together (chapter 4)

Sep 15, 2013 21:05


Brad reached out, fisting Dean's collar as the hunter teetered and clutched his ribs.
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etoile444 September 16 2013, 02:07:26 UTC
Oh that was so good. What have you gotten yourself into Dean? This writing is very good and I like your pacing. I also can picture it in my head. I look forward to trying to figure it out.

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sharlot1926 September 16 2013, 03:27:33 UTC
Thanks so much, etoile!

Yikes, Dean certainly is in the soup, now--for sure. But who doesn't like soupy!Dean, amirite or amirite? ;)

Thanks you also for your kind, KIND words. I had really great betas who helped me stay on track with the pacing and really helped me tighten things up. I do tend to be a little over-indulgent if left to my own devices. Heh.

Kat

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aerynsun5 September 16 2013, 13:18:56 UTC
Ooo, so good! Dean, you dumbass!

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sharlot1926 September 16 2013, 20:37:31 UTC
LOL, yeah, he's not exactly thinking this through. We know he has this protective instinct, but right now he needs to just hunker down, make some calls to Bobby and other hunters and get himself well. But then again...this is Dean we're talking about. So...

:)

Thanks so much for the comment!

Kat

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sharlot1926 September 16 2013, 20:38:46 UTC
Heya gluisa! Yikes is right. We'll have to see how he worms his way out of this...but I think I'll bat him around and play with him some more before that happens. ;)

Thanks for the comment, hon! Take care!

Kat

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jpgr September 16 2013, 15:14:37 UTC
Just checking in. :) I love seeing everyone's reactions to something I've already read (except the last 2)! It is an intense ride, people!

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sharlot1926 September 16 2013, 20:40:24 UTC
Heya Deb :) Have you not seen chapter 13? If not, I'll send it to you. I'm still fudging around with the final chapter. I promise it'll be done this week.

Big squishy hugs to you, lady!

Kat

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jpgr September 16 2013, 22:39:55 UTC
Nope. I checked the file and I only have up to 12. (I did mention that I gave the story its own file, yeah?) I didn't say anything earlier in case you were busy with it. Whenever you get the chance. Love this fic!

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sharlot1926 September 16 2013, 23:44:03 UTC
D'oh! I just sent it to you. :)

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arliss September 16 2013, 16:52:20 UTC
And of course I'm going, "No, that's wrong, the commune is on Ba-- Oh." Of course, there could be more than one, I'm sure.

Oh, Dean, Dean, Dean, look what you've gotten yourself into now. We haven't run across this sort of critter in canon, have we? Interesting development. I love the story, and am delighting in your writing style, and can't wait to find out what happens next! (And I want to find that aerie!)

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sharlot1926 September 16 2013, 20:50:54 UTC
Hah! Is there one on Bakerview or something? There are probably a few communes in the county. And to be honest...I kind of fudged with the exact location...because I couldn't quite remember where The River Farm is. For some reason, I think it was somewhere around Deming, but I can't remember for sure. I think it's still around. I did a search for them on the web and they still seem to be going (if maybe a smaller group these days). Oh lord, I hope they never read this story. LOL. Then again, they might find it amusing. Hah. Anyway...I remember going to their concerts they used to hold in the 90's. Tee!

Dean is certainly in the thick of it now. Geez. And no, we have not run across this creature in canon. It is a legitimate folklore critter, but I've somewhat mangled and molded it to suit my own devious purposes. It'll be a while before we find out exactly what it is.

I want to find that aerie, too! :P

Thanks for the comment, arliss. You put a smile on my face.

Kat

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