Part 3

[sharipep]

Title: A Better Finale
Rating: M/R, whatever, there's bad language in this one ;)
Genre: Angst/ about 2 % Fluff
Pairing: Drs. M. Grey & D. Shep
Timeline: Post that Crap-tastic Finale

A/N: so according to the handy dandy Microsoft Word Count, this bad larry is 5,483 words. DAMN. Its long. Long. Looooooong. I had to cut it short. So there will be at

Comments

[morgenwrites]

Oh, you are fabulous! I loved this so, so, SO much. I can't even pick a favorite part to go over because I found all of it to be so fantastic. I loved how everything kept getting all angry and shouty, how you went to the heart of Meredith's issues and the stuff that had happened between them in the past. There is so much that they've NEVER dealt with, and I like how it was almost as if they'd ripped the scab off this big infected wound, and everything they'd been supressing just came gushing out in a big mess of tears. It felt very cleansing in a way, getting everything out in the open like that. It was what I'd orignally thought we'd get on the show, some sort of huge fight/talk/cry where everything finally comes to a head. (Shonda clearly took the contrived route instead, but...)

Yeah, I loved this. Really, just thanks so much for writing it. I've really been enjoying this piece, and I can't wait to read part four. :)

[clearrainwater]

I will give you a Pulitzer. I will give you as many freakin' Pulitzers as you want because this was so. damn. beautiful I can't even think straight. I am quite literally sitting here, in my room, sniffling and sobbing because this had me crying since the beginning.

What a beautiful, wonderful part. I sobbed through the whole thing, but it was because it was so good I felt my heart breaking. You really captured Mer and Der, and I cannot wait to see the next part!

[anonymous]

It's Aideen again. :)

Wow. Like holy crap, wow. That was AMAZING Shari. I dont even know where to start. Just... wow. You should be proud of that, seriously proud of it! I'm proud of you for writing it! lol. Especially since you're so pessimistic about everything MerDer now, I know it must've been really hard to write! I cant wait for more!

[sparklepop777]

Wow. Wow. Wow. I'm speechless. That was amazing and real and...wow.

[mafischii]

OMG! That was amazing, and fabulous, and oh... I don't have words, you deserve a billion Pulitzers or more!
That was one of the best things I ever read in my life! seriously
Can't wait for part 4!
Hugs for you
Mafis