Part 1

[sharipep]

Title: A Better Finale
Rating: PG-ish, I guess
Genre: Angst, right now.
Timeline: Post that Crap-tastic Finale

So I dunno... this is just a smalll, teeny tiny little bitty. I guess 4 replies is better than nothing, haha. Thanks so much, friends!!! :)

He went back to the trailer, where he could be miserable all alone. He thought the entire drive about

Comments

[madison3788]

That was so good! But SOO sad! I can imagine Derek in his trailer crying and thinking all of this.

It's going to devastate him if this is how it actually plays out. Really, really destroy him.

So obviously...Meredith better fix this, Shari!

How many parts will it have?

[sharipep]

thanks pal. I'm not sure, only 3 or 4. I have written most of the 3rd part, but its meaty and I want to get it as good as I possibly can. :)

[carsonfiles]

I like it. I hope that Derek realizes he's done some distancing himself. And don't sweat 4 responses, that's more than I've gotten here at lj.

[dazeddaisy]

At work so the comment will be short brief and to the point.

Nice and angsty. I like.

[morgenwrites]

Oh gosh, that was so sad. So, so sad. It made me feel like crying myself thinking of broken, weepy Derek in his trailer. Anyway, I just loved this, even with the sadness. I think he would be that broken up over losing her, love of his life that she is.

So yes, fantastic! Please, please, please put the next part up soon!!!

[apurplepatch]

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Poor Derek, I just want to go to his trailer and sex him up comfort him.

Is he going to refuse to be put out of his misery?