[Fanfic] Body Heat- DomyoujixMakino -One Shot

[shardaunei]

Title: Body Heat
Pairing: Domyouji x Makino
Rating: NC-17 to fulfill my own need of MAOTSUJUN PORN
Genre: smut, or my Sho!fail attempt at it (fail minimized only with the help of jade_lil, the Jedi Master of Arashi smut fics), slightly PWP
Summary:Makino Tsukushi, is feeling cold in spite of her boast to Domyouji Tsukasa that poor people are used to the

Comments

[newbieth]

Its unbelievable that you can write this quick. Are you a writer or what ;)? Hic, this fic make me blush because you're so good at writing smut, don't deny it haha. Thank you for writing this and no worry, you are both welcome to chit chat on my blog because I enjoy it too lol. Uhm, I will post a lot of pic with hope that some would inspire you so that I have more fic to read haha.

[shardaunei]

I'm not a writer per se, but when I get an itch to write, I just force myself to write. Usually, my hobbies go in a cycle.
Oh, no, I really am not good with smut. I had LOTS of help from Jade, who I dubbed as the Jedi Master of Arashi smut.
That's fine about the pictures. For now, I'm out of ideas, so if you have suggestions, feel free. hehe.

[lowlowtappz]

omg POPCORN anyone !!!!

o_o I......LOVE.....IT.

*claps happily*. Thankyou thankyou for a real superfast one-shot.

*sniff* thankyou for also including me to inspire you to write this smut haha you made me *blush*.

Well what can I say but you sure pulled it off and I was totally gobsmacked. I still ain't over it and I just finished reading it another two times.

I know when I read this I was thinking omg they did it before being rescued yes that scene just keeps popping into my head the 'cave', I know such hentai thoughts haha only for these two only for them.

Oh well I will say again with credits to Jade for helping you I both think that you two deserve cupcakes for making this smut enjoyable for me to read yay!!!

If ever I do think of something would any input from me be helpful *smiles shyly*.

[shardaunei]

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. You are probably reading it again after you read this comment, right? lol

Well, if you have more ideas, feel free. hehe.

And thanks for the cupcakes. I love cupcakes, and a rainbow one, please.

[lowlowtappz]

Oh I did and the one written by yoshi as well oh the smuts. haha I am so bad.

No worries when I think of something I will let you know. As for the rainbow cupcakes I will try.

[jade_lil]

and here it is :DDDD

kuuuuuu, am I not the only who wishes for part 2???

[shardaunei]

ta~da~
Che wanted me to write a part two, too. Um.. kaya ko ba yan? hahaha...

[carey_chan]

*raised hand* nd part 3-10! (at least XD)*greedy brat*

[shardaunei]

uh, will part 2 be sufficient enough? lol. I'll give you cookies to compensate.

[huang_chan_lan]

You're right in saying that you Sho-failed since you did but then that's just my opinion, as we are all entitled to one. I do like Mao-san as an actress though.

[icedragontmr]

Unless you have something constructive to say, I suggest you keep your comments and opinions to yourself. Noone wants your opinion if you are going to be a bitch about it. Think before you post!

[jade_lil]

why can't anyone just shut their mouths up when they don't have anything good to say, right Juri?

[huang_chan_lan]

What I posted was constructive. It would only depend on how you perceive it to be. I'm sorry if you thought otherwise but isn't that why, as you say, you're accepting constructive criticism?

[carey_chan]

if that gif alone inspired you for -that-...*g* ne need to talk*laughs evil*

[shardaunei]

I do need more prompts. =D
And... I do have part 2 in the works.

[carey_chan]

maotsujun is so cute~ that doesnt need prompts XD well mao-chan won an award...how about getting a reward by her ouji? XP (and yes the award kinda looks phallic too)

yatta~ part two~

[shardaunei]

lol. interesting. Hopefully my brain can hack up something decent. =D