Do you plan on continuing this? Because this is awesome!!
It was like pulling teeth to read the original, but this!! This was so smooth, and interesting! I could easily loose a few hours reading something written in this/your style!
No really, you've made her clever and snarky and a little self-conscious, just like *gasp!* a REAL TEENAGER. That, and your writing style is great, flows v. well, a bajillion times better than SMeyer.
More, please! I will be filled with boundless glee if Edward turns out to be a REAL vampire (or even better, a Sidhe Lord in the Unseelie Court of the Fae)!
That would be awesome (both Edwards) XP I'm not too sure where I'm going with him; I'm thinking about keeping him the creepy stalker except Bella is like WTF. But no sparkles.
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Please (re)write some more!
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It was like pulling teeth to read the original, but this!! This was so smooth, and interesting! I could easily loose a few hours reading something written in this/your style!
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I like Bella. *braces*
No really, you've made her clever and snarky and a little self-conscious, just like *gasp!* a REAL TEENAGER. That, and your writing style is great, flows v. well, a bajillion times better than SMeyer.
More, please! I will be filled with boundless glee if Edward turns out to be a REAL vampire (or even better, a Sidhe Lord in the Unseelie Court of the Fae)!
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haha I kid, keep it up, it's already fifty times better than the actual thing :D
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I wish to read something with actual substance, a translation of the original version, I suppose? ...To something that people can actually read. :D
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