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shangrilada

Pour a Little Salt, Sam Was Never Here (PART 2)

Nov 01, 2011 04:47

Title: Pour a Little Salt, Sam Was Never Here (PART 2)
Summary: Immediately post "Born Under a Bad Sign." Dean is that hurt and Sam is that sick, and it's...more than enough.
Warnings/Spoilers: Through Season 2, really. Language.
Wordcount: 7,876
Author's Note: It's Sammyverse--Sam has asthma, the boys are best friends forever, you know the drill by ( Read more... )

hurt!dean, pour a little salt, sammyverse, dean pov, angst:high, sam was never here, sick!sam, supernatural fic, h/c, 2.14, fever, asthma, sick!dean

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clex_monkie89 November 1 2011, 12:00:20 UTC

Everything about this is love, and my hearts breaks for them so badly.

And I love and hate (for them) that they don't touch anymore because they're afraid of not stopping. The fact that Dean completely gets Sam, his need to be sure about his food, and to have all the control he can...

I'm rambling. I love this verse and everything you write.

shangrilada November 1 2011, 12:01:40 UTC

<3 <3 thank you. thank you majorly.

they start touching again! that's the blessing of this whole incident. it gives them an excuse to get comfortable with each other again.

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shangrilada November 1 2011, 12:07:33 UTC

MY WORK HERE IS DONE.

no seriously i have no idea what my wincest feelings are anymore. *FLOUNDERS IN SPACE*

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shangrilada November 1 2011, 12:22:45 UTC

I know. I'm a terrible person.

I definitely love the sexual tension. I swim in their sexual tension. That's usually as far as I go.

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jespretender November 1 2011, 13:51:39 UTC

This verse is absolutely fantastic. Your writing is wonderful, the dynamics between the boys is gorgeous and the storyline so heart wrenching. Thanks for such a brilliant read.

shangrilada November 1 2011, 14:32:05 UTC

Oh, God, thank you so much.

familybizness November 1 2011, 13:55:20 UTC

Holy crap, Christmas morning.

shangrilada November 1 2011, 14:31:39 UTC

YOU. <3

(I reread both the fics you wrote for me this morning. Twice.)

pixymisa November 1 2011, 14:09:38 UTC

No capslock this time, because this requires hush and awe and quiet.

Oh, beautiful work, gorgeous Dean voice, such delicious Sammy angst and Sammy pain. I love the parallels between the two parts -- even down to the father figure getting trapped mid-hunt! I love the level of codependency, too, Dean needing Sam with every breath he takes, and Sam just reeling from everything.

This one is pretty wincesty, but you can really read it both ways, and I absolutely <3<3<3 that level of ambiguity.

Poor boys. I wonder what the future has in store for them. I'm betting it contains nine different kinds of pain. I can't wait.

shangrilada November 1 2011, 14:31:08 UTC

Oh God it does. God knows it does. I have one that's totally finished that I actually haven't posted because it's just SO cruel. (It milks that "we can't go to the hospital because the FBI is after us" thing for all it's worth. it is TOTALLY plotless h/c pron.)

Thank you thank you thank you. And yeah, the Wincest is creeping up on me no matter what I do, seems like.