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shangrilada

Killing Sammy's Time

Oct 15, 2011 19:29

Title: Killing Sammy's Time
Summary: Nobody can see Dean, which would suck enough if not for the fact that his wheezy brother's having a hideous time trying to breathe. And it's hard to take care of Sam when Dean doesn't have a body and nobody can hear him. And a reaper won't stop following him. Except he's beginning to think it's not him the reaper ( Read more... )

hurt!dean, sammyverse, killing sammy's time, dean pov, angst:high, sick!sam, supernatural fic, h/c, 2.01, asthma, sick!dean

Comments 63

floralia2 October 16 2011, 10:57:37 UTC

I really love this verse. Dean’s voice is wonderful, you can really hear his trains of thought, and it ties into the episode beautifully.

I love the amount of detail you put in, and how you don’t hold any punches. For someone who doesn’t really know a whole lot about asthma I’m seeing it in a new and slightly terrifying light.

shangrilada October 16 2011, 18:08:54 UTC

Thank you so, so much. I'm having a really great time writing this verse, as is probably clear, hahaha.

vail_kagami October 16 2011, 17:27:52 UTC

That was all kinds of fantastic. Now, I know next to nothing about asthma, but you describe all the problems in a way that seems like you really know what you're writing about. I also love how Dean and Sam were so worried about each other that that failed taking care of themselves, and the fact that they've been bonded and now aren't, therefore being able to die on their own and fuck over the world...

shangrilada October 16 2011, 18:09:22 UTC

Thank you SO much, wow. And yeah, Dean, you have screwed everything up :/

wave_obscura October 16 2011, 21:53:39 UTC

YOU'RE AWESOME

shangrilada October 17 2011, 06:01:32 UTC

NO U

roshni06 October 16 2011, 23:09:08 UTC

This was awesome! I loved it loved it loved it. Asthma Sam = brilliant. Dean calling Sam his kid = me in love with you and your writing... :D <3

shangrilada October 16 2011, 23:36:31 UTC

<3 <3 <3 thank you so much.

rahmi October 17 2011, 04:04:36 UTC

but I take care of him because he's my kid and he hangs the goddamn moon, okay, so what the fuck excuse do you have?

I followed you from the 7x03 comment meme. ♥ And I love this above line almost as much as I love Dean thinking he gets Sam because he's sick.

shangrilada October 17 2011, 04:05:57 UTC

YAY! I am so glad you liked that line. It might be my favorite.

thank you for coming! stay!

rahmi October 17 2011, 05:03:41 UTC

Coming, then staying? :D

shangrilada October 17 2011, 05:09:30 UTC

YES.

YES.

YOU.