Fic: Full Metal Shoujo!

[shanejayell]

Title: Full Metal Shoujo!
Series: Original
Type: Humor
Characters: Miki, etc etc

Links: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2702326/1/

Comments

Minor nitpicks

[anonymous]

1) At one point, you accidentally wrote "Yuika".

2) Is Satsuki a teacher?

With that out of the way, I did like this story, and would like to see it continue.

PS. Will we need to be familiar with Full Metal Panic! to enjoy this story? I've only read its spoof, Full Metal Panic! Overload! (which was cute and funny).

[breaktherules10]

I thought it was very cute. I'd like to read another chapter:)

[shanejayell]

Heh, thanks! :)