Teaser Tuesday!

[shanasilver]

So I haven't posted a teaser in a while and I thought I would in honor of FINISHING MY REVISIONS! This excerpt is from a brand new scene in the novel and I heart it so much.

A little background, my protagonist--who shall remain nameless for purposes of this teaser--needs to get into Town Hall to find information. The antagonist, Kingston, is the one

Comments

[brian_ohio]

I really enjoyed that. Great banter while getting acrossed a lot of emotions. I sense a bit of an attraction between Kingston and the MC, maybe more one sided, but it's there. Nice Job!

[shanasilver]

So glad you like it! Out of curiosity and to see if I'm doing my job right, which side did you think the attraction was on?

Because, oh, it is there. But only for one of them in this scene. (Or at least one of them that acknowledges it.)

[brian_ohio]

Well... I thought the attraction came from the MC... the way she reacts to the booty call comment leads me to believe she was very embarassed at the truth behind it.

[seeyouupside]

Voiiiiiice! Gah, Shana, you put me to shame...and now I want to read more. Is it bad I find Kingston hot? And I've only read this snippet of him? *swoon*

[shanasilver]

Yay! I'm glad you like it!!! And phew on the voice comment because I've been working my butt off on the voice! haha.

Not bad that you find Kingston hot. (Secret: I do too.) I love him a lot more after these revisions.

[edgyauthor]

Love this! The interaction between Kingston and the protagonist is great, and the overall snippet has left me hooked. It makes me want to see what happens next and everything that had happened previously. :)

[patesden]

Loved it. I could really see the scene and the pace was great. To me it felt like she was attracted to Kingston.

So, what happens next? :)

[denisejaden]

Love it, Shana. It's got some really good energy and yes, great voice!!