FIC I Wanna Let Go

[shanachie_quill]

Title: I Wanna Let Go
Characters: Steve McGarrett/Danny Williams, Mary McGarrett
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0 AU
Series: Honolulu ‘98731 verse
Written For: N/A
Prompt: N/A
Summary: Dating is difficult, even when you are both determined to make things work.
Rating: R
Spoilers: Really at this point…you shouldn’t be reading unless you’ve read the rest of

Comments

[mrssnape13]

:D

That was honestly my face when I saw you'd posted a new one!

Fabulously in character, and the SEALS movie was a nice touch. I, like, Steve, also can't wait for the beach trip. :)

[shanachie_quill]

*blushes* Aww thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying this.

That's awesome that you think they're in character. It's so hard with them being teens and all.

LOL I watched the movie not too long ago and I thought I have got to work it into one of my H50 fics somehow, it just worked out well for it to be this one.

Hopefully I'll be able to work on the beach trip soon.

[shanachie_quill]

*dances around the room* And that was me when I got the comments. I'm so happy everyone likes these.

LOL I love that movie...it's so...dumb and yet so much fun. Yes, the beach trip should be...interesting.

It's started, but apparently they've decided to keep things to themselves since the season ended so we'll see what happens soon. I've got a few other things that have deadlines coming up and then I'll re-evaluate my list.

[whogeek]

YAY!!! You used the one song I thought of for this! :D Awesome. And Steve worrying about Danny riding when his knee is acting up is adorkable. As per usual.

Post-beta:
"Not that I have an issue with sleeping with me." I think that should be 'sleeping with you' there.
"fussing with it until it was settled until it was sitting to his satisfaction." Settled or sitting, one or the other, not both.

[shanachie_quill]

The song worked, why wouldn't I use it?

Of course he'd be worried about him.

Thanks for the heads up...I fixed them.

[shanachie_quill]

Yes I did and the corrections were made.

Of course Steve was worried about Danny. :-)

[jusmine984]

...That is quite easily the most gorgeous and hot icon I have ever seen!

[shanachie_quill]

Please have your conversation elsewhere since it does not pertain to the post and stop filling up my in box.

[samjohnsson]

\o/

[shanachie_quill]

:-) Thank you

[irishjeeper]

I was checking my flist this morning and saw this and did a silent little happy dance (roomie has a migraine so I was trying to be quiet) ...

I knew I wouldn't have time to read it before work, so you're kicking my work day off just right. Thanks love! *smooch*

Mary is a brat! LOL ... and Steve is just adorable!

[shanachie_quill]

*is amused by the image of you doing a silent happy dance*

Glad I could start your day off right.

Well, yeah. Of course she's a brat. I have to keep reminding myself that she's only 14. And how could Steve be anything, but adorable. :-)