Fic: Archaios apaitisi (Ancient Claim)

[shamrockivy]

This came out better and easier than I thought it would. Homework is sadly, still not done.

Title: Archaios apaitisi (Ancient Claim)
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Relationship Status: First time
Rating: R for mild slash
Word Count: 1,085
Summary: One year after the choking incident, things have changed.
Disclaimer: I do not own. I make no money

Comments

Mmpf!

[elfqueen55]

HOT! Love it, love it, LOVE it! Will there be more? C'mon, this can definitely be investigated further...but meanwhile, it's delicious, very well done! :)

Re: Mmpf!

[shamrockivy]

There might, might be a possible continuation of this, but for right now it's wrapped up.

At least until semester is over.

[ose93]

"The one with dark eyes would allow none but himself to satisfy his mate who lay underneath him..."
My, I just love extremely dominant!Spock, and this line had me smiling, for some reason. C:
I like the fact that names were not used, it seemed to establish that names weren't important for this claim. It was only about one being claiming another physically.

Aw man, my homework has also been left unfinished. Ugh D:

[shamrockivy]

Your points were exactly what I was going for. I didn't use names in the previous two parts and really liked how that turned out.

And homework on weekends should be classified as immoral. Especially on holiday weekends.

[stripesco04_nur]

I felt like I was watching a documentary on the way Kirk and Spock mate...

Going into my memories!

[shamrockivy]

It was my goal to aim for the more animalistic/primal approach to their first sexing since that was the underlying theme in the previous two parts.

[lepoete]

Your mood after writing this made me laugh.

This was awesome. I agree that the lack of names had a great touch to it.

[shamrockivy]

I hadn't even noticed that until you pointed it out!

[embercookie]

I want to see the show of intent and the courtship
:( pls this was so awesome it just cries out for more.

[shamrockivy]

Well since you asked so nicely, I guess I have no choice but to write up their freaky Vulcan courtship.

It'll probably not get done until around Thanksgiving though, since my homework load's the heaviest it's ever been.

[embercookie]

lol I just found time to check my LJ and find your comment right before thanksgiving

[shamrockivy]

My classes have been pretty hectic here and my dates have been pushed back some, but there should be more coming in the near future.