Running with Rapidash [Chapter one]

[icarused]

Hello there. ^^ I'm Blaze and I like writing and Pokemon and this is a boring introduction, so we'll skip on ahead

Comments

[immemoire]

I read it all! I like how it's detailed to the point of realism, but it still manages to be poetic. I always thought the area of Sinnoh around Solaceon Town was interesting, and I'm glad to see it developed here. It's lovely for an introductory chapter, and I can't wait to see more.

(There is a missing word, however. ;;
" Eliza walked to the barn to feed all the other Pokémon. With several acres and a variety of barns and buildings across the ," )

[icarused]

Thank you! The area around Solaceon Town (or from Solaceon Town to Hearthome) is one of my favorite areas in the game because it's a very nice area with a variety of hins to work with in a story setting.

But I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I do have the second chapter finished, but I'm going to edit it before I post it here. But it should be up sometime next week.

Oops. ^^; Thank you for pointing that out!

[icarused]

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^ I'll be editing the second chapter over the weekend and I'm hoping to have it posted by next week.