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[vampirepeaches]

Hi there! Thirteen years after being introduced to Pokemon, I wrote my first Pokemon fanfiction. I'm slightly nervous about this, so helpful reviews are much appreciated :).

Title: Intercede
Rating: T
Genre: General, Hurt/Comfort
Pairings or Characters: Kris/Silver
Warnings: Character death
Word Count: 1650

Comments

[lark]

This was gorgeous. The only concrit I would have is that you lean a little too heavily on semicolons, but oh man, breathtaking imagery (my favorite was Silver staring at the frozen sky), beautiful word choice, excellent characterization.

Wonderful, wonderful! I really loved it! ♥