[Merlin] Experiencing Slippage Into the Future 3/3

[shamera]

Comments

[reni_m]

Oh my gosh, what a story.
That ending made it seem like this could be a never-ending story.
Well done!

[shamera]

Thank you! :D

I always thought memories were the most interesting thing to play with. XD;

[sallyna_smile]

Oh GOD.
This was sooo weird, but so well done! *.*

I wanted by bbs to be together though /sniffs/

[shamera]

Actually, I'm hoping to do something a bit... not-so-sad-ending? XD;; Since greenclove has another image she showed me, and weeeeeell, I can't not try to write a continuation where they do meet again. ^^;;

[sallyna_smile]

YES PLESE XD

[claudine]

This was excellent. Great read, you managed to constantly keep that tension in the air palpable. I was on the edge of my seat! Very nice bringing in canon elements with the cyberpunk setup; with magic and time control and future predicting! The ending is heartbreaking, that everything that Merlin installed into Arthur is gone. ;_;

Question; so, did Merlin and Arthur actually meet as children? I think you meant it to be vague but I just had to know!

Also, typo I think? Discrete is supposed to be discreet. :)

[shamera]

Thanks! \o/ I wrote endless notes about how the magic in Merlin could be transcribed into a science for cyberpunk. ^^;;

And if it helps, while I wrote it, I honestly believed that Merlin and Arthur met as children! XD;

(oops, will get that, thanks for pointing it out! o/)

[archaeologist_d]

Whoa, that was intense. I loved how you couldn't really tell what was reality and what wasn't. Loved that Merlin tried to give Arthur so many lifetimes and in the end his father destroyed it. Great job.

[shamera]

Thank you! \o/

[anonymous]

This was amazing oh my god this is my favorite fanfic so far. I loved the plot and how the system worked my favorite part was the "you remember my ringtone right?" Or something like that :D

[shamera]

I'm really, really glad you liked it!

That was a subtle detail I hoped people would pick up and not have forgotten by the end of the story, so good job! XD