Somewhere

Aug 23, 2012 00:35

somewhere on the road - that road just beyond your window - there is the sound of a car. its engine is a low vibration at the base of your skull, an errant buzz that niggles and tickles your mind until you can't help but be pulled into it. into the why,

and where,

and whoof it. of the possibilities that cloud your thoughts and muffle everything ( Read more... )

[writing]: type: {2nd pov}, [writing] drabbles, [writing] original, [random], [this is me]: writer

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waltzingstar August 23 2012, 00:31:04 UTC
PRETTEHHHHH. I love this <3

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shakespeare August 23 2012, 22:45:12 UTC
Oh, thank you so much. It means so much you read it. <3333

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sheerpoetry August 23 2012, 00:52:02 UTC
Don't you dare apologize for this! It's gorgeous! I love the other-worldliness of the normal. And it's very peaceful, even if it does seem a tad sad.

It's lovely to see you post something--and "original" at that! Please share more, if you write it and feel like it! ♥

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shakespeare August 23 2012, 22:47:37 UTC
I'm kind of glad you got the sadness in this - it wasn't meant to be wholly happy, especially as the ending... well, that can be taken more than one way.

There will definitely be more original things from me on here, and finally getting around to editing and posting my original novel/story to my comm, too. :D I'll try not to leave it so long next time.

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shuralove August 23 2012, 06:56:51 UTC
finally

The best thing to wake up to? Oh I think so. What a wonderful surprise. It's so quiet and peaceful. I shall read it again before I go to bed tonight.

Please. More please.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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shakespeare August 23 2012, 22:49:08 UTC
As always you know I'd love to know what you get from this. Also if it reminds you of anything else, stylistically. I didn't do it deliberately, but it maybe has echoes of something. I will say this, I loved writing in this style though. :D

And... I think I can try and do that for you. ♥

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dance_the_dance August 23 2012, 17:57:34 UTC
I might do this again - just write whatever springs to mind in drabble form and post
Please do! :) It was lovely. ♥

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shakespeare August 23 2012, 22:50:22 UTC
Oh thank you so much! And hello! I'm kind of relieved you don't mind me posting little drabbles. <3 Writing is something I just... I love it so much.

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dance_the_dance August 23 2012, 22:56:07 UTC
AW! I'm happy to read gems like that. ♥ Some of my favorite things to read are about everyday things described in an unusual way. :) And creative writing is something I can't do unless a landcomm challenge makes me do it, lol, so it seems a bit like magic to me. xD

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shakespeare August 25 2012, 22:35:57 UTC
I'm the same with vids/anything over icon-making in graphics - I tend to just try and get by with the minimum effort because I'm really not that good. Graphics have the same magic for me. <3

Some of my favorite things to read are about everyday things described in an unusual way <- you've nearly described exactly what I love to write. :D

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sane_psycho02 August 24 2012, 11:13:28 UTC
Wow, that is really awesome! :)

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shakespeare August 25 2012, 22:36:24 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! <33

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