Prim and Proper (Community fic)

[sinecure]

Title: Prim and Proper (1/1)
Author: sinecure - My master fic list
Character/Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Rating: R (adult)
Word Count: 2,800
Genre: Um... smut?
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Jeff happens across Annie doing something that makes his mind jump to dizzying heights of lusty lust.
Disclaimer: I don't own Community and I make no money off of it.

Comments

[crittab]

L. O. L!

I was thinking and thinking and thinking of what it could possibly be that would sound THAT sexual. Knitting wasn't even in my top 50.

So hot, and so funny. Perfect Community smutfic :D

[sinecure]

Hee! I thought it was obvious what she was doing, especially since I accidentally left the AN on the outside of the cut when I first posted. I've never hoped people wouldn't see my fic posted like that before. Luckily, I fixed it quickly. I think.

Knitting is verrah, verrah smutty, and now you know. ;)

Thank you! :)

[yarisag100]

That was hilarious and so sexy at the same time. I knew it wasn't what it sounded like from the very beginning, but can you image it if it was? lol, your fics are always awesome and I'm glad to see you back, it's been awhile, or at least it has been, in my mind.

[sinecure]

Thank you! Hee, that'd be hilarious if it was. Now I'm imagining it. Oh... nice visuals!

Aww, thanks. I knew it'd been a while since I posted, but I didn't realize anyone noticed. I may be posting more soon.

[nyclove3]

[sinecure]

Hee! Thanks!

I know, right? Of course, look at where all of our brains went. Hmm? Yeah? Not just guys doing it. ;)

The thing is that I can absolutely imagine Britta teaching Annie like this because she never learned the terminology and just got annoyed with it all and did it her own way. So, she passed it on and now Annie's passing it on to Troy and... in my mind, Troy's going to teach Abed and/or Pierce, who then tries to teach Jeff, only to have him up and leaving all the time, and then Annie disappears soon after him.

Meanwhile, Shirley's sitting there, knitting and watching all the fuss going on, wondering if she should tell them all the correct terms for things.

Oops! Forgot to add a thank you! I said above that I knew it'd been a while since I posted, but I didn't think anyone else noticed. :)

[teruel_a_witch]

Troy's going to teach Abed and/or Pierce, who then tries to teach Jeff, only to have him up and leaving all the time
HAHAHA oh my god, lol, do you think Jeff would still get a boner even if Pierce tried teaching him about knitting? XDDDD

[sinecure]

LOL, talk about your weird boner. That'd be hilarious and something I may just have to write someday.

[teruel_a_witch]

[sinecure]

LOL, wow, high praise. I know how much you love the shower smut. 9by the way, Jeff's staring at me as I type this... repeatedly doing his orgasm-face. It's distracting.

It was supposed to be funny! I meant it to be a very short, maybe slightly longer than a double drabble, fic and then it kept going. And then Jeff insisted on touching himself. And then there were fantasies and rubbing and Annie saw him and it just went from there.

So. Remember one of those other endings I mentioned having for a fic? Yep, it was this one, and I did mean to Smut-ception the reader. Huh... Jeff-POV smut is a little hotter. I never thought about it before. Both are awesome though, but maybe that's why I tend to write smut from his POV. Actually I do that with all my ships

[teruel_a_witch]

And then Jeff insisted on touching himself.
LOL, for once thinking with the other brain turned out to be the smart thing to do for him *gg*

Remember one of those other endings I mentioned having for a fic? Yep, it was this one
Yeah, thought so, what was the other one? I take the one you chose was the shorter ending.

I did mean to Smut-ception the reader.
to make us think it was all a fantasy?

Jeff-POV smut is a little hotter. I never thought about it before.
I realized it a lot time ago, I guess it's maybe because male brain is more rough and less flowery in fic? Idk *gg*

maybe that's why I tend to write smut from his POV.
Hee, seems like those are fic you are holding out then ;) Because of all the smut you posted so far, this is the only one from Jeff's POV. Well, except from the short vignette that was from both of their POVs.

But when you're constantly pushing the damn needle through a tight stitch and complaining how tight it is, it really does start to sound dirty. Haha, I didn't complain, idk, and Gran was mostly showing

[sinecure]

Yeah, thought so, what was the other one? I take the one you chose was the shorter ending.

Just a small part where all the sexy-times were in his imagination and he was all alone in pleasuring himself, which would've eben even creepier than it is now. Nothing too planned with that, just bleh. I had this ending written, but had always kind of thought he'd be imagining it. Then decided not to.

Hee, seems like those are fic you are holding out then ;) Because of all the smut you posted so far, this is the only one from Jeff's POV. Well, except from the short vignette that was from both of their POVs.Uh-yup. I have many smut scenes written and I think they're all from his POV. Maybe? I can't seem to think lately. I don't know

[stephanierb]

I was wondering where you'd gotten off to, I was really missing your fics. This was seriously hot. There are not enough Jeff and Annie have sex in the library fics.

I really enjoyed this. Like someone commented up thread, I spent a good part of the story trying to figure out what Annie was doing. Knitting did not occur to me, either, though after thinking about it, you can make it sound dirty.

I love that Annie is both scandalized and turned on at the discovery that Jeff is jerking off in the library. That is so HER.

And I love the hint of something more than lust behind the sex. It's just enough to give it a bit of sweetness. Well done.

[sinecure]

I really hadn't realized I'd been gone that long. I've been around, and writing, I've just been working on stuff that isn't ready to post yet. Which sucks. Also the Big Bang Fic From Hell.

Mmm, is that a thing? J/A have sex in the library? Because I'll totally write more.

LOL, I thought it was going to be obvious to everyone what Annie was doing. I'm grinning because it wasn't! Yay! Yup, kinda, sorta dirty. Especially if Britta didn't learn the terminology and just described it in her own, fun terms.

Hee! I love that she was so scandalized and shocked and yet... dude, that's Jeff, rubbing himself right by her... ooh. Or it's really, really creepy and gross.

Little side note? With my fics, there is always something deeper between these two. Just read it as leading to the happy ending we all want! Spoilers? Hehe.

[stephanierb]

It probably hasn't been that long, I've just really missed your stuff. :-)

I don't think J/A sex in the library is a thing, but it's a personal fave of mine. The whole trying to be quiet while others are studying nearby is pretty hot, IMO, so there can never be enough of that kind of fic. lol

I love that she was so scandalized and shocked and yet... dude, that's Jeff, rubbing himself right by her... ooh. Or it's really, really creepy and gross.

If it was anybody else, then I'd probably go with creepy and gross, but I look at it as the sexual tension had just built up to a point that Jeff couldn't take it anymore and needed release. Fortunately Annie was there to help him out with that. ;-)

[sinecure]

It's been pretty long I just realized. Since the Kink Meme. I actually still have a fic to finish from that.

Ohh, I see. Well, let's try to make it a thing, shall we? I'm game!

LOL, so true, so true.

Chang? CREEPYICKYDIRTYWRONGANDGROSS!

Jeff? ...kinda hot.

We're not at all biased.