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Glimpse Fic: Glimpse of Reunion (1/1)

Aug 24, 2008 20:53

Title: Glimpse of Reunion (1/1)
Author: momdaegmorgan - My master fic list
Rating: Adult
Spoilers: None
Characters/Pairings: Ten/Rose
Summary: A bittersweet reunion.
Prompt: She burns like the sun. -- Muse, Sunburn
Disclaimer: Doctor Who owns my soul. I own nothing.
Author's Note: Beta by sinecure

( She sits astride him, moving with the grace of the wind, rising and falling upon him in time to the rhythm of his breath; quickened with need and desire. )

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Comments 20

hotchellerae August 25 2008, 03:19:53 UTC

This is actually REALLY good. Very subtle and just incredible. Fantastic post!

momdaegmorgan August 25 2008, 22:48:39 UTC

Thank you!

trustme1013 August 25 2008, 05:38:09 UTC

It reminds him of times past, and he realizes that she never needed the vortex inside her to hold such power over him.

LOVE that line. Love it. It makes the piece completely. Great work!

momdaegmorgan August 25 2008, 22:49:50 UTC

Thank you! I loved that line too...in fact, the whole fic pretty much was written around it.

in_a_union_jack August 25 2008, 06:11:49 UTC

Want to write up a properly coherent review for this, but will need more than 3 hours of sleep to do so.

In the meantime, I settle for:

I love this! Some lovely smut and yet, so much more! Best of both worlds, as I see it. This bit in particular does it for me.

She rips her lips from his, rising above him, a halo of light obscuring her face from his gaze. She's golden and bright, and she burns like the sun. It reminds him of times past, and he realizes that she never needed the vortex inside her to hold such power over him.

Fantastic!

momdaegmorgan August 25 2008, 22:54:50 UTC

More than 3 hours of sleep is always a good idea. Too bad I rarely get it though...

If you enjoy angst and smut, you should really read Sinecure's Glimpse of Truth on this comm. In addition to providing me with this prompt, her fic inspired this scene, and did a much better job of it. :)

Thanks for the review.

helygen August 25 2008, 08:15:56 UTC

This is amazing and that last paragraph is so very telling. I love that Rose doesn't need to hear him say it, and I love the gentle urgency of the whole piece. Gorgeous writing, once again :)

momdaegmorgan August 25 2008, 22:56:33 UTC

Thank you!
And yea, I don't think she really needs him to say it. She knows, she really does. Of course, it would still be nice if he did.

electrictoes August 25 2008, 15:52:09 UTC

Brilliant.

momdaegmorgan August 25 2008, 22:57:08 UTC

Thank you.