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Fic: A Marauder Boy and The Great Seduction by the_realduck

Dec 01, 2011 15:20

Title: A Marauder Boy and The Great Seduction
Username: the_realduck
Art: Which Marauder Boy is gay? by chalada
Word Count: 2239
Rating:Pg-13
Contains: **Some language, terrible attempts at seduction.**
Summary: Sirius is a crowd pleaser. So why doesn’t he please Remus?
Notes/comments: So LATE. Life intruded, but I did finish! This didn’t go where I thought it ( Read more... )

fic: a marauder boy and the great seduct, artist: chalada, author: the_realduck

Comments 21

epithalamium December 1 2011, 08:43:47 UTC

Haha, poor desperate Sirius! And with friends like James, who needs enemies, right? I really liked James here, you know. He's such a nice friend, even though he takes a lot of piss. :D

This made me laugh, and heaven knows I need that. Thanks so much for this, hun!

the_realduck December 29 2011, 18:59:47 UTC

Thank you! Glad it brought you some smiles :)

dustmouth December 1 2011, 10:43:23 UTC

haha is it terrible that my favourite part of this was Sirius amending his bad luck by conceding that he at least had an attractive arse? :D

Poor Sirius, he was trying SO hard. I think you had the relationship dynamics between Sirius and James perfectly. There's nothing like friends like that, right?
Really great, I think your story matched how light hearted the artwork was perfectly <3

the_realduck December 29 2011, 19:00:55 UTC

Oh not terrible at all, in fact, the whole bit about Sirius and his attractive arse was one of my favorite lines :) Thanks for reading!

remuslives23 December 1 2011, 11:04:02 UTC

This is simply adorable! :)

the_realduck December 29 2011, 19:01:08 UTC

Thank you :)

brighty18 December 1 2011, 16:24:31 UTC

LOL. Well, you already know precisely how I feel about this. (In fact, when I went to open Word, your story was still up. Weird.) Still, I wanted to say publicly how much I enjoyed it.

I really loved Sirius here. I’m always a sucker for a hesitant or confused Sirius, but you wrote him exceedingly well. And he was so witty and funny - even when it was only in his own head. I very much imagine him that way, too: really privately witty:
James snickered. Peter grinned. Remus had simply blinked again, which Sirius had been greatly upset by. Those pants were far too uncomfortable to garner a simple blink. He had been hoping for a swoon, or a flush, or an arse-grope. Certainly not a blink. With a frown on his face, he had swaggered after James, Peter and Remus to go get their headsets. Tried to swagger actually. The pants were really abysmally tight. Yes, bits like that really shone!

Poor Sirius, I loved his brilliant plans and felt they were very in character. The chocolate over-kill? This: “Remus had a bad dream! A nightmare James! ( ... )

the_realduck December 29 2011, 19:03:26 UTC

You're entirely too sweet :) I'm so glad you liked it! This is actually my first fanfic, and I was rather worried that I wouldn't get Sirius' voice right, so I'm glad I succeeded! Thank you so much :3

mommyconk December 1 2011, 19:42:59 UTC

This is adorable!! and Yea for Dr Pepper! I love his brilliant plans, very cute.

the_realduck December 29 2011, 19:03:44 UTC

Thank you :)