Comments | shadynaiad: Unfurled, Enfolded

shadynaiad

Unfurled, Enfolded

Jun 19, 2011 22:58

Title: Unfurled, Enfolded
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danny, steve, steve/danny, hc_bingo, hawaii 5-0

Comments 8

huntress69 June 20 2011, 04:35:09 UTC

I was about to go to sleep, when I decided on one more fic. I am literally crying from my laughter.

“I don’t know, it just seemed nicer than ‘What the fuck, Danny, wings?’“

I salute you and your superb ending! (And sending to Mems, because this is too funny and has to be read again!)

shadynaiad June 20 2011, 04:41:46 UTC

Thank you for your lovely comments! I'm thrilled you liked the ending. :)

shinysylver June 20 2011, 05:25:43 UTC

I really do love the idea of Danny unintentionally cooing when Steve pets him.

shadynaiad June 22 2011, 02:49:17 UTC

Danny hates me for it.

starbuckssue June 20 2011, 20:56:08 UTC

I so loved this, it did make me laugh, especially the ending!

shadynaiad June 22 2011, 02:48:37 UTC

Thank you!

noctuabunda June 21 2011, 22:09:43 UTC

Bwaahahaha! So many great lines!
Please excuse my silly need to quote them back at you (even though I'm pretty sure you know them already):

"I don’t know, it just seemed nicer than ‘What the fuck, Danny, wings?’"

“Fucking hell, Danny, could you say fuck a little more?”

“Fuck the fucking fuckers. Oh, fuck me, I don’t know.”

Steve watched Danny’s brain attempt to derail at that point, but the rant was strong in him.

Also, the ending. <3
Just marvelous.

shadynaiad June 22 2011, 04:03:23 UTC

Thanks! I have to admit, those are some of my favorite lines, too. :) And I'm glad you liked the ending!