Closure [Snippet] (ORIGINAL)

[shady_fetish]

A snippet of an original idea I have forming in my head right now. I am probably going to reformat it so that I can adapt it into a graphic novel eventually. I know the story, however, and I know the quirks that I need to work out.

However, here's a preview of the beginning. Have to share my original work some time! >.>

Comments

[mikaverleth]

i could leave you a comment ("omg, continue" and some nitpicky creative writing majour grammar things), but i'm not sure if you'd want it, because it'd be ridiculously long.

is this part of a longer story?

i hope that your summer has been good! we haven't talked in a while...