Enoch!story introduction

[shadows_of_fire]

Continuing with the theme of writing my Creative Writing assignments on lj:

The assignment for today was to write a character-introduction scene, introducing both character and conflict. I decided to play with Enoch again. I'm fairly sure I haven't succeeded at introducing either character or conflict--the body-finding scene did better at that, I

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[neromir]

It looks good to me. I can't think of anything that I can really suggest to improve it. That could be for one, or a combination, of two reasons 1) it's really good and really doesn't need to be improved, or 2) my brain is shot because I've been doing homework all day/week and still have more to do, and I just can't think of anything.

By the way, "Light Up My Room" is a good song. It's one of my favorites.