The Concubine's Son- Prologue

[shadowofmyday]

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Shim Changmin had been working as a palace guard since he was fifteen, six years now. He came to the palace because his parents couldn’t afford to support both his sister and him, therefore taking a job in the palace was needed.  He'd known he would be fed and housed in the palace, while being paid six hundred won a month. He had been saving

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[shadowofmyday]

jaceni

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[jaceni]

^___^ Spot for me. Hehe. As a beta I thought the length good, but as a reader it's too short! Hehe, like I told you before, it's very interesting and can't wait for the next part.

P.S. You missed changing Jaejoong's name here: "or so Jaejoon had thought"and "even though Jaejoon didn’t know at the time". Changing it to a u really makes it easier to notice more the change in name. ^^

Love ya forever for having my two fav. pairings in this very interesting fic. ^___^

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[shadowofmyday]

Haha, as a writer I thought this chapter was too short, so I'm aiming for longer chapters in the future.

Thank you! (And this is why I need a beta)

[hhazellee]

spot for me :D

[hhazellee]

whoa! this is promising fic :)
even though jaejun sounds like a bastard, but i know someday he will gain changmin's respect. and steals his heart :)

[shadowofmyday]

Yeah, he does a bit.

Thanks for commenting!

[shadowofmyday]

Yeah, Jaejoong doesn't really get out of his room much? He's like a well-kept secret so he doesn't have 'bonds' as such with any one really.

I will! I've been meaning to write this for months! ^^ Thanks for commenting!

[peach_gerl16]

Oooh~~ looks like a promising one :) It's been quite sometime since I read a jaemn palace/ kingdom verse.

Hope you will update soon, can't wait to learn more about jae's past & jaemin's development.

By the way, if u are interested in a poster, I can make 1 for you since i'm totally loving the story, so ya i thought maybe i can do 1 that if u want me too, just refer to my journal if u want to see works :)

[shadowofmyday]

Thanks! I'll try to update soon!~

That'd be totally cool! Thank you!

[shadowofmyday]

Yeah.

Thanks for commenting!