Comments | shadowlies: "Daddy Always Said Puppets Don't Breathe," Claire, HRG, Nathan, PG-13

lostdreamer56 in shadowlies

"Daddy Always Said Puppets Don't Breathe," Claire, HRG, Nathan, PG-13

Jul 26, 2007 23:45

Title - Daddy Always Said Puppets Don't Breathe
Rating - PG-13
Characters/Pairings - Claire, HRG, Nathan; implied Claire/HRG, Nathan/Peter, Nathan/Claire
Written for - pretty_stickers Challenge 4
Originally Written - July 26, 2007
Spoilers/Warnings - Spoilers up through 1.23 "How to Stop an Exploding Man," AU after that with notes to Pasdar's new facial do
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{character} - noah bennet, {pairing} - claire/noah, {character} - claire bennet, {fandom} - heroes, {challenge} - pretty_stickers, {character} - nathan petrelli

Comments 8

iamlillykane July 27 2007, 07:17:57 UTC

this is lovely. i wasn't TOO into the hrg/claire stuff but it was beautifullt written and i loved the nathan and claire stuff. :D

lostdreamer56 July 28 2007, 01:29:23 UTC

Thank you so much!

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lostdreamer56 July 28 2007, 01:29:47 UTC

:) Thanks so much!

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lostdreamer56 July 28 2007, 01:30:12 UTC

Thanks.

entity22 August 4 2007, 13:47:05 UTC

I'm not really into nathan/claire but I love HRG/Claire and u wrote this very well,I loved it

fading_spark August 19 2007, 01:56:39 UTC

OMG DEDICATION! Thank you so much hon, really, it means the world to me. ♥

And seriously, this was just perfect, utterly perfect. I'm speechless honestly. The emotion behind this is just breathtaking and I felt so bad for Noah and Claire. If I could, I'd highlight the whole thing cos it's all so freaking amazing! But I think this stands out the most:

He watches her dance in the sunlight; it pleases him to see her here, smiling, grinning, acting like the teenager she is.

It's just so freaking pretty. I can imagine it and it's so gorgeous and so unlike the rest of the story which is rather grey and grim. I just love that line, really beautifully written. ♥

You know what I find amusing. It mildly reminds me of my most recent Claire/HRG video, "Not Gonna Get Us". Just how their constantly running. It's interesting that we've both thought of that. *shrug*

But anyway, fantastic work, as usual! I absolutely adore it. Thank you so much for writing it!! ♥

lostdreamer56 August 19 2007, 17:17:03 UTC

Hee, well, I was just great to see you were back and plus, you seemed down, so thus, your reappearance kicked me to finish this up.

Oh, and thank you so much! I'm actually kind of fond of this piece, which is rare.

I also noticed that in your wonderful, wonderful, wonderful vid of those two (I watched it; AMAZING!).