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shadowgirl1605

[Bleach] Sightless Knowledge - Tousen + Wonderwyce

Mar 17, 2008 17:58

Title: Sightless Knowledge
Fandom: Bleach
Characters: Tousen, Wonderwyce
Notes: Speed ficcing with
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drabble, speed fic, tousen, bleach, wonderwyce

Comments 14

mysocalledhell March 17 2008, 22:09:01 UTC

teehee ... it's very cute ... much more lighthearted than my piece ... i likes it.

shadowgirl1605 March 17 2008, 22:11:18 UTC

XDD Thanks ♥

yawns_widely March 17 2008, 22:12:53 UTC

Beautiful rendition of Tousen and his limitation and yet not...so much depth and insight: 'Tousen admires words because although he cannot see them in this world, he can see them clear as day in his mind’s eye, the only place that counts. “Does that make sense, hm?”

BE SURE TO POST THIS IN THE TOUSEN X WONDERWEISS COMM.

I saw myself in this Tousen, for too many times have I caught myself using big words and foreign concepts when talking to my nephew of five - and I'm telling you this why? Well, I'm telling you this because this was my reaction - so of course you have achieved a realism and have connected with the reader - ta dah! :D

Go you!

shadowgirl1605 March 17 2008, 22:46:08 UTC

XD I catch myself doing that a lot, too. Like yesterday at the party I was at for my nephew. And then finally my niece was all "what's that meaaaan? Stop using big words without explaining, Apriiiil!" Kids are so cute ♥

Aaaand, what is this community of which you speak? =)

yawns_widely March 17 2008, 23:01:35 UTC

http://community.livejournal.com/purespirits/

Go here. It's relatively new and I feel kinda guilty that I have nothing to offer the comm at the moment.

It's good to draw upon life experiences in writing, shows we're paying attention!

shadowgirl1605 March 18 2008, 04:11:47 UTC

XD Posted it~!

And yes! Agreed. It's nice to draw off things we learn in real life ^_^

bellumina March 17 2008, 23:12:19 UTC

Woow~. That's a totally different side of Tousen -- and it's a waaay different Tousen than I write, that's for sure. ♥

I SENSE APRIL RLY LIKES WONDERWYCE ALL OF THE SUDDEN.

shadowgirl1605 March 17 2008, 23:38:04 UTC

♥ I love how we have different views of the characters~ But I like your Tousen the best, yes I dooooo~!

HAHA, APPARENTLY I HAVE A THING FOR HIM NOW? APPARENTLY.

bellumina March 17 2008, 23:40:34 UTC

XDDD <3 EVEN THOUGH I RLY DON'T LIKE HIM.

BUT. Y. YOU CERTAINLY DO.

annieroo2 March 18 2008, 02:05:04 UTC

Such a simple story to convey so much depth. Very interesting and intriguing. Even though I'm not a big Tousen fan, I enjoyed this story. You must have done a kick ass job. :)

Once again your endings pwn me. =D

shadowgirl1605 March 18 2008, 03:17:29 UTC

Simple is easiest on my poor brain, yes ma'am. Glad you enjoyed it~! Nooot a big Tousen fan myself really. But hey, we tend to write those we dislike better than those we love and adore. *shrugs* *snickers and thinks of Kendra and her Tousen that pwn's ass*

nnoi March 18 2008, 15:29:11 UTC

awwww I love this!!!!

shadowgirl1605 March 18 2008, 17:18:17 UTC

<3 Thank yooou~!