Flowers - Bleach Drabble

Mar 01, 2008 09:29

Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its characters. That would be Kubo Tite.

Author Notes: =) Oh look, another addition to the one-sided love series thing. Kisuke visits Masaki’s grave, the idea courtesy of
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isshin, drabble, 100 themes, bleach, urahara

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nnoi March 1 2008, 16:49:12 UTC
beautiful

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shadowgirl1605 March 2 2008, 18:34:41 UTC
*hugs* Thank you~ Will you be on tonight? =)

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naughty_gurrl March 1 2008, 18:07:15 UTC
Sniff. You are breaking my heart.

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shadowgirl1605 March 2 2008, 18:33:34 UTC
*brings out the duct tape* =( Nuuuu, no broken hearts on my watch! *hands over tape for some mending*

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liralen March 1 2008, 18:14:56 UTC
Wow...

Thank you. So very, very sad and tired...

Beautifully and so concisely written, too. Nice work.

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shadowgirl1605 March 2 2008, 18:31:26 UTC
*blushes* Glad you thought so. =) *hugs*

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mysocalledhell March 2 2008, 04:04:07 UTC
that was so wonderfully written ... so moving ... so touching ... beautiful.

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shadowgirl1605 March 2 2008, 18:20:39 UTC
Awww~♥ *blushes*

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annieroo2 March 4 2008, 03:05:28 UTC
OMG! The bitterness, sadness or forlorn feelings just poured from this fic. Still as often as I say it, I find it remarkable how much emotion you can pack into one tiny little fic. I almost felt like crying at the end. I think if it had been any longer I would have.

I love the rawness of Kisuke's emotions when he's talking to Misaki. And his conclusion that it should have been him to die so Isshin would be happy again felt so horrible yet so real.

I absolutely adored this even as sad as it made me. It felt like you really got to the heart of Urahara. Thank you for writing this. :)

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shadowgirl1605 March 4 2008, 21:29:35 UTC
=( Oh man, I don't wanna make anyone cry. Good thing it wasn't longer then! But I'm glad you liked it, nonetheless. I've been trying for realistic in the more serious ones, while with the light-hearted ones I've been sneaking in a lot of silly.

An-and this is way off topic, but apparently my Urahara is now the first thing people think when they think of me? I find this kind of funny XD Megan said whenever she writes something for me, he always tries to sneak in. I-it's hilarious. *is helping Kisuke take over the world through mind manipulation*

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