Comments | shadowgirl1605: Expectations

shadowgirl1605

Expectations - Bleach Drabble

Feb 29, 2008 16:05

Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or its characters. That would be Kubo Tite.

Author Notes: >.>; Yeah, this didn’t turn out right. This might be one of the ones I revisit in the end and re-do, but ah well. Let me know what you guys think~! I took
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isshin, drabble, 100 themes, bleach, urahara

Comments 10

nnoi February 29 2008, 22:44:06 UTC

awwwwww *wibbles*

shadowgirl1605 February 29 2008, 23:47:50 UTC

=( Kisuke gets no Isshin lovin' except, you know, unless you count the gigai XD

liralen February 29 2008, 23:04:59 UTC

The ending worked for me... gave me a shiver at the deliberate choice to cut off what's real for what's artificial.

shadowgirl1605 February 29 2008, 23:48:22 UTC

=D I'm glad that part worked at least~! Thanks! *hugs*

naughty_gurrl March 1 2008, 03:24:34 UTC

This was sort of romantic yet creepy but still bittersweet. Romantic because Urahara sort of got the guy, creepy because he made the guy and chose his personality and bittersweet because he really wanted the real Isshin to want him like the Mod soul did.

shadowgirl1605 March 1 2008, 14:40:04 UTC

XD Glad the weird combination worked for you~!

mysocalledhell March 2 2008, 03:05:13 UTC

awww ... poor Kisuke ... Isshin doesn't love him ... *huggles Kisuke*

That was beautifully written. I do so love your writing.

shadowgirl1605 March 2 2008, 18:23:05 UTC

=( Kisuke never gets any real love, does he? Poor guy.

But, thank you for the comment. ♥ I'm glad you like my writing =)

annieroo2 March 4 2008, 01:42:23 UTC

This was so not where I expected you to take this, but it makes me love it all the more. Definitely more on the realistic side and more in tune with your Kisuke/Isshin series as a whole.

You really have a way with the ending lines too. You somehow use that one or 2 sentences to sum up the "moral" of the story.

This was very bittersweet and even a little depressing to see Kisuke so hurt that he didn't even have the energy to take advantage of a creation he built solely for himself.

I felt it really fit with the tone of your series, but as it's your creation if you feel it's necessary to revisit or revise it, I will gladly read more Urahara/Isshin. =D

shadowgirl1605 March 4 2008, 02:55:24 UTC

:O My stories have morals?! WHA?! *giggles* Just kidding. Thanks for such a sweet comment ♥ =D Still lots of themes left to go yet, but I look forward to continuing with this Urahara/Isshin series XDD