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Oct 10, 2010 11:49

the rain
so many times the rain
falls wherever it wants to go

i
watch the world drip
i watch the lights turn into floods

this sound
lulls me into sleep
or fascination

the sky
slips down drop by drop
sliding down fingertips
and saturating hair

i
walked into the rain
because i liked the way it fell.

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cruel_pussycat October 12 2010, 19:31:46 UTC
..i like rain. today is raining. all day.

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shadowdrip October 14 2010, 04:59:10 UTC
i always liked watching people with umbrellas... like flowers suddenly blossoming in the rain. although i've live in cities where they had no use because the wind tore their petals off and fed them to the sky. i prefer not to use an umbrella because i think the weather feels nice and the clouds... i want to see them

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cruel_pussycat October 22 2010, 11:05:14 UTC
you beautifully describes perfectly ordinary things, as a talented writer. I've said this before?
I also prefer not to use an umbrella just in the summer. it's great to walk in the rain, feeling its coolness all over body, walk through the puddles. mood rises.

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shadowdrip October 23 2010, 09:20:28 UTC
it's nice to meet someone who appreciates the rain as much as me. well, i suppose we have a lot of things in common.

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