Comments | shadowbyrd: Love stay thy hand [fic]

shadowbyrd

Oct 31, 2008 12:47

Title: Love stay thy hand
Author: shadowbyrd
Rating: G
Pairing: Tosh/Gray
Word Count: 1366
Summary: Gray wants to die. A kiss will guarantee it.
A/N: A very bit weird.

( Toshiko is beginning to regret volunteering to get her own lunch today. )

Comments 8

fanbot October 31 2008, 15:40:36 UTC

Nice. I can see this.

shadowbyrd November 12 2008, 21:46:31 UTC

Thank you.

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shadowbyrd November 12 2008, 21:52:52 UTC

Yay! Converted!

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

smirnoffmule October 31 2008, 16:21:39 UTC

Lovely. I love the line about Jack's name particularly - how it stops so suddenly. Perfect.

shadowbyrd November 12 2008, 21:54:08 UTC

Heh. Gray's had slightly too long to dwell on it all, really, hasn't he?

Glad you enjoyed it. X

theatervine November 1 2008, 17:25:05 UTC

I like this, I like the sense of regret and wistfulness. Well done.

shadowbyrd November 12 2008, 22:07:03 UTC

Thank you.

theatervine November 13 2008, 03:02:09 UTC

You're welcome!