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shadowbyrd

Lost boy [fic]

Jun 27, 2007 22:13

Title: Lost boy
Rating: PG - 13 (very implied sexual situation)
Pairing: Jack/Tosh
Word Count: 1027
Prompt: 46. Star for
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Comments 26

jwaneeta June 28 2007, 02:58:53 UTC

What a lovely, low key vignette. The gentleness between Jack and Tosh is fresh, though a little sad. Loved it.

shadowbyrd June 28 2007, 23:04:43 UTC

Thank you!

And, yes - I'm not sure either of them trust that he's actually going to stay.

dirty_diana June 28 2007, 03:43:24 UTC

I enjoyed this like whoa. Very nice Jack thinky thoughts and I like the whole star imagery, used very nicely.

shadowbyrd June 28 2007, 22:58:34 UTC

I loved the star bits, especially with Tosh's eyes.

larielromeniel June 28 2007, 06:00:06 UTC

Beautifully done. Going into my memories so I can re-read in the future.

shadowbyrd June 28 2007, 23:05:18 UTC

Thank you.

merlins_sister June 28 2007, 07:26:58 UTC

*happy sigh*

shadowbyrd June 28 2007, 23:08:02 UTC

*smile*

hellenebright June 28 2007, 09:29:57 UTC

Really liked this. Very subtle, but very telling. Jack almost at the point of realising that "home" is where you make it, not where you go to.

shadowbyrd June 28 2007, 23:03:06 UTC

I think he's already realised it - he's at that point where he knows that, he's knows that's what he should be doing and he's starting to try and act on it. That point where you're going the right way, but you're dragging your feet and looking longingly in the other direction.

And sometimes you carry on walking, sometimes at the last second you turn around and walk the other way, consequences be damned. Jack's carried on walking, but this is Jack and I think it would be all too easy for him to just glance over his shoulder and snap.