Drowning on dry land [fic]

[shadowbyrd]

Title: Drowning on dry land
Rating: PG - 13
Prompt: 64. Fall
Summary: Jack's not crazy. Really. He's just been thinking a little too long.
Word Count: 2095
Warning: Weird format.

Jack has, throughout life, been lectured on the evils of his “shoot first, questions (and apologies) later” methods, and to begin with he tried to take it on board. Always

Comments

[atheneunknown]

I really liked this, though I appreciated the warning.

It was a bit confounding to follow for a bit there, but somehow that worked FOR it rather then against it.

Just added to the feeling of being in character, because we all know that trains of thought don't always ride a straight and narrow track like we'd prefer them too.

[shadowbyrd]

*giggles* Glad you managed to get around it, and that it added to it for you. I did maybe get a little carried away with it, but it was too much fun!

[lacesforalady]

Very beautiful. Memorying.

[shadowbyrd]

Thanks.

[laligin]

*applauds* Hee. Much shiny.

And precogging on the quote. *nod* We're too psychic for DW/TW. :)

[shadowbyrd]

That we are.

And of course you like this one. You're in it, after all...