Nihon: Apples

Oct 31, 2010 22:32


Title: Apples
Characters/Pairings: KuroFai, SaSy mentioned
Rating: T - warnings for a little bit of language, but mostly just dorky fluff. Post-series, so spoilers throughout
Summary: On a certain world’s festival the group tries using apples to divine who they’ll eventually marry.
A/N: Another instalment in the Nihon series, chronologically set before ( Read more... )

[fics], [fic] nihon, [fandom] tsubasa reservoir chronicles

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uakari120 November 1 2010, 00:25:41 UTC
I just want you to know how difficult it is to keep myself from smashing the keyboard in pure fangirl squeeeeeeee.

I didn't think anything would ever surpass "Lantern Lights" as my favorite installment of this series, but DAMN. This is so sweet and funny and wonderful and and and! <33333

This part killed me especially:
“How many people are you proposing you marry, manjuu?”
“Lots and lots! Mokona has many admirers.”

I can now go to bed tonight a very happy girl XD

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steamcry November 1 2010, 13:13:36 UTC
B'aaawwww, this made my day, though more likely my week as well. I get so excited every time I see a new story from you.

I'm such a horrible sucker for pure fluff and moreso for ones done in-character, and dear god do I love this. You write all the characters so well; their interactions just make me smile the whole time.

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maijame November 6 2010, 02:00:51 UTC
Awww~.. so sweeeet and tricky! A most amusing treat we got here, though! I was grinning to myself over the so very IC characters here, you really manage to copy their manner of speech as I have it in mind perfectly and it makes reading this story as good as nibbling my favorite chocolate.

Mokona should have gotten an F for Fuuma though, but that's just me. XD

I totally didn't expect the Y! Darn, I SHOULD have, but it never even occured to me! And how Kurogane couldn't peel the apple alone with just one hand was so very adorable, I melted into a mushy pile of chocolate!!

And yes Syaoran, being the only adult around is hard work. Kurogane probably thinks the same... ^.~

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the_myrah November 15 2010, 01:23:50 UTC
This was just adorable and well-done. I was not expecting the y, but looking back how else could it be?

Kuro actually inviting Fai into his lap and Fai actually blushing over Mokona spilling the goods were definitely the highlights of this for me.

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ankou_chan January 23 2011, 12:52:23 UTC
/turns up late

That is actually one of the cutest fanfics I've read in all my fandom life.

I love the idea with the 'y', I wasn't expecting it, although it did cross my mind...

Love for you. <3

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