Fic: Ever After (12)

[shadow_of_egypt]

Title: Ever After
Characters/Pairings: Characters abound from the multiverse, and if you think you spot a pairing, it’s probably there. 
Rating: T
Summary: ‘Fairytale’ is a very trying place. Children get abandoned; loves fall under evil spells, and various members of royal families get abducted on an almost regular basis. Even with a witch on-hand

Comments

[xxray]

Ffffffff I'm so happy you updated! I'm totally in love with this story <3<3

[shadow_of_egypt]

Very glad you like it~! And...yeah...my update time is slowly getting worse and worse, isn't it? ;;;

[mikkeneko]

Yay! I had to go back and read a few of the last chapters in order to follow what was going on, but on the other hand, am I really complaining? ;)

This chapter was a little hard to read, but I was captivated. Rondart really is a jackass, isn't he? And Seishirou. Somebody needs to kick both their asses.

[shadow_of_egypt]

That's what I get for waiting around five months before updating. >> I run off and get distracted by shiny things. ;;

...I'm still trying to work out what the point of Kyle was in TRC canon, other than as an ineffectual mini-villain and a decoy for FWR at the end. He...ran around trying to steal feathers that FWR didn't need? Uh...
Now I think about it, maybe that was the purpose for his existence. He kept the group distracted...?

As for readibility - was it bad formatting, or bad writing? ;;; If it's the former I can only apologise; I argued with LJ for two days, and it insisted on breaking something about the chapter (seriously, you should have seen one of the earlier bastardisations it gave me - the last section was at the front, the first section had vanished, and everything came out in a gobbledegook mixture of html and italics). If it's awkward writing - apologies for that too? ;;;;; Fff. *mini-flail*

[mikkeneko]

XD Honestly, the only thing that made it difficult to read was the formatting -- I'm too used to the double-break style of formatting, so it was a bit awkward to read it all in one block like this.

Kyle Rondart server the purpose of... I dunno, giving us more than one villain to hate? For such a long time, FWR really just sat around and did nothing in the first part of the series. Or at least, seemed to do nothing.