Fic: Ever After (8.1)
Title: Ever After
Characters/Pairings: KuroFai, AshFai, SyaoSaku and DoumWataHima(ish?) Basically, anything implied (or outright stated in recent chapters of the manga with some pairings) in CLAMP canon that my mind stumbles across.
Rating: T
Summary: ‘Fairytale’ is a very trying place. Children get abandoned; loves fall under evil spells, and ( Read more... )
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I love fairytale AUs for Tsubasa especially if they have KuroFai, but I love every character here! The Ame Warashi made a grand entrance and I really hope she continues to show up on a somewhat regular basis!
Yuuko...well, she's Yuuko and how Watanuki kinda stumbles into her shop, without really knowing anything anymore is so lovely in character for him!
What else... yeah well.. the marital bliss...x'D...no words for it... I enjoy these parts the most, especially since Kurogane makes such a PERFECT wolf!
And finally Yuui meets Tomoyo... I'm really curious now and hope you get the next part finished without a hitch!
You're new to the fandom I gathered? But the characters are remarkably IC for that! I really hope you continue to write and provide KuroFai for me (ah yes, and the rest of the fandom...).
Best wishes and my compliments!
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I have a terrible fondness for the Ame-warashi and the Zashiki-warashi - not enough (yet) to write fic about them alone, but...my, how could I possibly turn down someone who wields an umbrella like a sword? ^w^
I'm glad Yuuko comes through as Yuuko (she can be horrible to write when she's being serious), and as for Watapon...I almost feel bad for the torture I put him through. Almost.
Kurogane and Fai are...ridiculously domestic, this chapter. Kinda odd considering one of them's an animal half the time but~ *laughs* They adapt well. Fai teases; Kurogane swears; Fai ignores him; Kurogane yells at him; Fai teases; Kurogane chases; Fai ends up sitting in a tree laughing at his fiancé.
...Er, I'm new writing-wise...ish, though I've been reading the manga and fics, and watching the animes/OVAs for a lot longer. This is my first fic for it though, so thank you very much for your kind words/support. *never fails to fuzz up*
I'll do my best?
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And YES... the Ame-warashi and Zashiki-warashi, especially together, are so very adorable!
Umbrella used as a weapon..I had some issues with umbrellas used as weapons...I don't know whether you know Weiss Kreuz, but the female fighting with an umbrella (with a heart shaped handle) kind of disturbed me. Anyway.
The Ame-Warashi is one incredibly powerful spirit in her own way, but still ...well sociable is the wrong word..approachable maybe and a little similar to Kurogane. She could easily command armies and the Zashiki-warashi is simply sweet and cute and the childlike awkwardness is adorable!
Domestic is the word here...I mean the eternal question who is to answer the door is a very important one for all married couples, because the one giving in... is usually the one giving in regarding other things as well....*smirk*
My favorite quote in this chapter: “I don’t have hands.”Stating the obvious isn't going to help against Fai-logic, Kuro-ponpon! * ( ... )
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Alas, no, I'm not a Weiss Kreuz fan, so the umbrella-weapon thing is still quite novel to me. And...she probably could take on armies with that thing...
As for the domestic issues - there are more of those to come~ And I hold firmly to the fact that Fai could probably get Kurogane to do anything, short of comminting treason against Tomoyo.
...Yeah...those fairytales at the beginning so aren't the best-kept secret in the world. X3
Hopefully, the second part (out of three ^^;;; - I try, but these chapters just keep getting longer and longer) should be up later today, so~!! *crosses fingers and trots back off to finishing up the next section*
And I'm probably dangerous to know. You chat at me, and I chat back.
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