Fic: Ever After (7.1)

[shadow_of_egypt]

Title: Ever After

Characters/Pairings: KuroFai, AshFai, SyaoSaku and DoumWataHima(ish?) Basically, anything implied (or outright stated in recent chapters of the manga with some pairings) in CLAMP canon that my mind stumbles across.
Rating: T

Summary: ‘Fairytale’ is a very trying place. Children get abandoned; loves fall under evil spells, and

Comments

[archangelunmei]

Ooooo, cliffhanger. =3 I eagerly look forward to tomorrow's part.

Chii is so cuuuuute~!

Once again, I love♥ the KuroFai interactions. Especially the drinking scene in the rain. ♥

And the house-tree was Xing Hao's, wasn't it?

[shadow_of_egypt]

Chii's adorable. TRC-canon doesn't give us all that much on her, but I still want to pick her up and cuddle her. She's like sort-of-human-fluff incarnate.

Yep, the tree was Xing Huo's (think that's how I spelled it before >> ), as I just told you on msn. ^^

And the drinking scene - you talked me through that, if you remember? Your first helpful suggestion was locking the two in a closet. >3

[archangelunmei]

XD So glad I could give you help.

[shadow_of_egypt]

You've been invaluable insofar. ♥

[crys_tenkari]

Mmmm, dripping wet Fai, yum yum yum...

I do think you've hit Chii dead on, if one assumes she's very like her Chobits counterpart. Very sweet and lovely and just wanting happiness for everyone. Very much a pile of fluff, that girl.

I think, also, you've wonderfully captured Kurogane, especially the sharp insight fandom sometimes forgets he has. You remembering them makes me happy, as that's one of my favourite things about him.

Fai's evasiveness? Also amazingly captured again, and how he tries so very hard to brush off everything.

...also, Yuuuuuiii...! ;-;