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shadow_hive

Before The Feast

Oct 01, 2009 03:37

Before The Feast
Pairing: Bert McCracken/Dan Whitesides/Jared Leto/Quinn Allman
Rating: NC-17
POV: Bert
Warnings: AU, rape, bondage, fisting, death, cannibalism
Notes: For wild_orchid7's request of Jared boiling in oil. (However, that turned out to be not as much involved as it coulda been but...)
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dr_pepper_print October 1 2009, 03:56:19 UTC

Part of me wants to be grossed out, but most of me is loving this!

shadow_hive October 1 2009, 17:02:19 UTC

:D Loving is goood

dr_pepper_print October 1 2009, 18:00:23 UTC

One thing I'm wondering about is what would they do to entertain themselves while Jared Leto was cooking in the pot?

shadow_hive October 1 2009, 21:07:49 UTC

I've no idea really*blush* Making out, groping, laughing at Jared....

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emmaopteryx October 1 2009, 12:15:14 UTC

i don't know whether i should be creeped out, embarassed or laughing that while i was reading this, 'burning up' by the JoBros came on.

loved it thoughhh <3

shadow_hive October 1 2009, 16:58:55 UTC

All of the above:D

Yay!< 3

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shadow_hive October 1 2009, 16:55:24 UTC

:D thankie!< 3

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shadow_hive October 1 2009, 23:02:49 UTC

Mmm maybe! That'd be hot! I did ponder doing that, but then there'd be too much meat:P

wild_orchid7 October 1 2009, 19:04:51 UTC

I had a feeling that describing all that boiling thing would not take much time so I had an idea about a raping as a foreplay. You practically read my mind and this alone is quite amazing.

I love the entire scene and especially the cigarette stubbed into Jared’s palm. I never miss an opportunity to do such cruel things with Jared’s soft skin and I have an adorable torture scene with a hot cigarette in one of my fanfics, too.

I’m totally happy that my idea gave you inspiration and the fanfic definitely made my day! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! *bounces, clapping her hands*

shadow_hive October 1 2009, 21:09:49 UTC

Yay! I got it from your head:P It's scary!

Awesome !I wish I'd worked in a bit more torture but... *nods*

Yay! I'm glad you thought so:P

blck_cherry October 2 2009, 06:09:57 UTC

Boiling a human alive has a lot of potential for long and detailed explanation like blisters quickly forming all over his skin and the detaching form the muscle instants later in small and thin strips of tissue leaving the red muscle cook to look like brown juicy meat ready to eat.

Something like that :D

wild_orchid7 October 2 2009, 10:38:42 UTC

Aww! It was tasty! It’s wonderful to find another twin-soul! Do you write sadistic fanfics yourself? Definitely, you have your style. *runs and hugs you tight-tight*

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blck_cherry October 2 2009, 06:05:02 UTC

No tentacles, damnit! I want the godamn fiction with tentacles. No gore, no stuff like that, just fucking tentacles and Oli/Craig, so much to ask for? D:

[I get demanding after 1am].

I'm a very patient woman and I'll wait... but just don't look out of the window or you'll get freaked out at the staring girl from the other side of it. MWHAHAHA.

Very interesting ending btw. I don't like boiled meat though.

blck_cherry October 2 2009, 06:10:58 UTC

Okay, I spammed your comments. Sorry lol.

shadow_hive October 2 2009, 08:44:01 UTC

So I saw< 3

shadow_hive October 2 2009, 08:43:33 UTC

Soon cutes, soon! :P For both. Maybe next week

I noticed:P

Wah! But I'm on the first floor! You're floating! WAH!

Thankie< 3 I figured you'd like causa Bert being cannibalistic

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