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ER Fic: Coming Home (Ray/Neela)

Jan 28, 2008 15:57

Title: Coming Home
Author: shadow_diva
Fandom: ER (TV series)
Characters: Ray Barnett/Neela Rasgotra
Prompt: 012. Distance
Word Count: 1,080
Rating: FRT (Fan Rated Suitable for Teens)
Summary: Eighteen months and 810 miles, and it all came down to one moment.
Warnings: Spoilers for 13.21 through 14.1.
Disclaimer: Not mine. ER and its characters are the ( Read more... )

50scenes: ray/neela, er: ray/neela

Comments 4

spritewithnoice February 2 2008, 21:02:44 UTC

I don't watch ER so I don't really know the backstories to these characters but this was a wonderful story! I love the way you write :)

shadow_diva February 2 2008, 22:26:48 UTC

Thanks. :)

phindle February 19 2008, 23:51:05 UTC

This was perfect. And there's another 50 like this coming up? It's going to be a good year ( ... )

shadow_diva February 20 2008, 00:52:10 UTC

Why thank ya. :) There are 49 more prompts (well, 101, I guess) to write, and some of them will be continuations of the events laid out here, but a lot of them will be scenes out of the multichapter fic I have going. I have so many scenes in my head for later on that are screaming to be written - right now dammit! - so I figure I can use the prompts as a way to clear my head of some of the clutter, since so many of them fit so well with things I wanted to get in there.

And I could see their reactions to everything in my head with this. I knew exactly what was going to happen and what it would have looked like if it were on screen; it was just getting from my head to the computer. :P

And I'm not above gratuitous making out, either (the prompt table for ships50 has a crap ton of prompts that sent the muses straight to The Gutter), but I like my realism more. And with all their issues, moving right into kissing when they've just seen each other for the first time since he left Chicago just doesn't make sense, and it doesn't fit the ( ... )