Protect Me, Love Me - Chapter 21

[shadow1290]

Chapter 21

“Not Dead but Wishing It”

Disclaimer - I do not own Four Brothers

Pairing - Bobby/Jack

Rating - M

“Talking”

‘Thinking’

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~~~~~~~~Bobby’s POV

He sat in the armchair in his mother’s shot out house, staring at a picture of Jack that was hanging on the wall. His body was aching and he wondered if this was because his brother was dead or

Comments

[sweetebonyrose]

WHOOOOAAAA HOLY SH*T!!! I read both chapters, and they were worth the wait! When Jack "died" after getting shot, I was like O_o? But now I find out that he heals himself?! And oh no Bobby, he better move out the way quick! There's so many things I liked about the chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next!

P.S. There were a couple of typos in the chapters 20 and 21: erection(20) and Christian (21) were the ones I noticed

[shadow1290]

LOL!! thanks for sayin' that! Ya that was supposed to be a huge shock. I wanted the whole movie to play out, mostly to what really happens, so he had to 'die' lol.

Stay tuned for what happes next but I sure everyone knows I don' kill Bobby so.. *sighs* lol

And thanks for tellin' me about the typos.. I always spell erection wrong! lol but hey .. I don' have that lol!

~shadow

[ngirl16]

oh this is so good poor jack and the family i hope Jack and bobby get together soon can't wait to read more

[shadow1290]

soon, my dear, soon! lol

stay tuned till next time!

~shadow

[angle1buffy]

so good.... Like always. I was thinking I was going to be so mad if you killed Jack. And it was all like Ahhhhh in my mind. But it is better now... sort of. Jackie has been through so much. I just want to hold him and cuddle him. Bobby really needs to move out of the range of fire fast.
I love it sooooo much.

[shadow1290]

thanks so much for the review!

stay tuned to find out what happens

~shadow

[charlie_rokz]

OMG!! I hope this reaches you. I recently moved to a new place and the internet here sucks. If this finds you I want to say how kickass this and the last chaopter were. I can't wait for more. It is amazing and so are you.

[shadow1290]

Yes it reached me and thank you... I've been depressed all day and your review cheered me up a little.

Thank you so much and I hope you're able to read the next chapters on Friday, with your internet connections.

stay tuned

~shadow

Great Story

[thedeadletmego]

Great chapters as usual. I dont except nothing but the great from ya Shadow.

But these last to chapters I absuloty loved them. Especially since it showed them furing the movie and everything. Love how you still show the Bobby/Jack stuff even through all the chaos happening.

Now it's really suspenceful. Hopefully Bobby doesnt get to badbly hurt...hopefully he doesnt die...because that menas Jack would die too. I am glad though that Jack finally realized BObby was his mate.

Can't wait for the next two chapters. =)

~Amaranth~

Re: Great Story

[shadow1290]

Thanks Sami, the chapters are up and ready to be read! lol

Where have you been anyway? I was gettin' worried. I didn' have internet yesterday so I have a lot of mail to go through but I think I have some mail from you.

ttyl

~shadow