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musesfool December 26 2004, 01:24:35 UTC
*sniffle*

Oh, that's so sad and beautiful. And I love that Sirius really hasn't changed that much, that he's still stubborn and refuses to let Remus's stupid reticence stop him.

This bit just broke me:

“It doesn’t matter; I don’t accept that.” His hand came to rest across a silvery line of scar tissue that ran across Remus’s belly. “Do you remember how we always said, ‘forever?’ It isn’t over yet,” he muttered, and pressed his lips to Remus’s shoulder. “...I hate that I don’t know this scar.”

*sniffle*

Thank you!

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creaturespotter December 26 2004, 21:16:07 UTC
I agree with everything you said...

And I just wanted to say that that icon makes me cry.

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musesfool December 30 2004, 04:50:16 UTC
Aw, it's meant to be a hopeful icon. *is enjoying the Pyramids*

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blacksatinrose January 1 2005, 19:27:30 UTC
*butts in*

I'm glad you liked it. :D :D :D

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setissma December 26 2004, 02:01:39 UTC
Oh my god. That was fantastic - heartbreaking and beautiful and wonderful and perfectly, amazingly in character. Incredible job.

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blacksatinrose January 1 2005, 19:35:17 UTC
Eeee, glad you liked it! I am flailing, but you cannot see.

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callmesandy December 26 2004, 05:21:36 UTC
Oh, I could feel the weight of it, of all of this, how much Remus felt. Very nice!

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blacksatinrose January 1 2005, 19:52:08 UTC
>< Thank you!

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castaliae December 26 2004, 06:52:26 UTC
I really enjoyed it. Remus' hesitance, and feeling that he should be hesitant, while Sirius still had some of the drive from before Azkaban. Muted but still there. There's such hope in this, it's terrible knowing the coming outcome.

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blacksatinrose January 1 2005, 19:54:54 UTC
Ee! Am glad you enjoyed it.

(I tried not to think too much about the outcome, because otherwise I would have needed to write DEATH OMG.)

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jerel December 26 2004, 15:40:35 UTC
Hi. I came through here on musesfool's rec. This was beautiful. Very vivid descriptions also. I like your cautious, unsure Remus. Thank you for sharing this with us. :)

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blacksatinrose January 1 2005, 19:55:10 UTC
Glad you liked it. :D Thank you much!

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