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Neither Sign Nor Symbol by _kenaz_

Dec 25, 2005 01:29

Title: Neither Sign Nor Symbol
Author: _kenaz_
Summary: Outside, it is snowing, snowing. I am like snow, Sirius thinks: pale and cold and drifting on invisible currents, falling without sound.
Rating: PG-13
Recipient: thistlerose
Notes: Includes a (very) subtle nod to thistlerose's own story, Storytelling. Happy Holidays, Thistlerose!

( for lj user=thistlerose )

by _kenaz_, for thistlerose, ootp-era, su_sesa 2005, fic

Comments 30

thistlerose December 25 2005, 19:11:19 UTC

I'm like the snow: melting.

Oh, this is gorgeous! I could feel the cold and then the slow warmth as Remus joins him. Thank you so much! I love it!

kenazfiction January 2 2006, 22:56:40 UTC

Unmasked at last! Glad you enjoyed it. I hope it lived up to expectations-- it's always intimidating to write for writers I admire.

Cheers,
k.

thistlerose January 3 2006, 05:35:44 UTC

*blush* I LOVE it! Hee! And now that I know who you are, I can check out more of your writing... Whee!

kenazfiction January 5 2006, 03:44:51 UTC

*sigh*... currently, there's very, very little to check out. Hopefully, this year will be a little more productive, but what can I say: I'm a novice :)

Fic: Neither Sign Nor Symbol secondsilk December 26 2005, 11:00:01 UTC

That's glorious.
It's just that scene, Sirius at the window until Remus comes and claims him back for bed. But it captures everything of the time, and even of before once a flying tackle might have been as likely or more than this cautious hand.
I can see, and it's beautiful.

Re: Fic: Neither Sign Nor Symbol kenazfiction January 2 2006, 22:57:17 UTC

*blushes*
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

minnow_53 December 26 2005, 18:29:43 UTC

Random non-participant comment: hope that's okay.

Minimalist, too -- sorry -- but I have to say that this is absolutely lovely in every way.

kenazfiction January 2 2006, 22:58:24 UTC

Random non-participant comment: hope that's okay.
But of course!!!

Minimalist, too -- sorry -- but I have to say that this is absolutely lovely in every way.

No apology necessary... kind words always make me smile. :)

Happy 2006!

topaz_eyes December 26 2005, 20:29:20 UTC

This is beautiful--love how Sirius feels so isolated at the window looking out, how he realizes that Remus is his "one place where everything is warm and solid and real."

kenazfiction January 2 2006, 22:59:13 UTC

Thank you!

kestrelsan December 26 2005, 23:48:06 UTC

This is really nice - I like how you've really drawn out that moment. It's like this transitory soap bubble filled with snow, which of course doesn't make any sense :). I like it.

kenazfiction January 2 2006, 22:59:47 UTC

Makes perfect sense! :)

I'm glad you liked it... thanks for taking the time to comment. :)