Comments | shackinup_sesa: And This Is Our Life Aquatic by <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/angelgazing">angelgazing</a></strong>

shackinup_sesa

And This Is Our Life Aquatic by angelgazing

Dec 25, 2005 00:27

Title: And This Is Our Life Aquatic
Author: angelgazing
Summary: It's not easy, this doing the right thing.
Rating: pg13
Recipient: regala_electra

( for lj user=regala_electra )

by angelgazing, for regala_electra, post-hogwarts, su_sesa 2005, fic

Comments 29

restless_jedi December 25 2005, 09:07:36 UTC

Wow. This...it made me sigh. Aloud. In a house that wasn't empty. I don't even know why. But it's elegant.

angelgazing January 4 2006, 07:16:50 UTC

Thank you. :D

fadagaski December 27 2005, 01:34:36 UTC

I think 'elegant' is exactly the right word. Graceful and poised and flowing. Love it.

angelgazing January 4 2006, 07:19:24 UTC

Thank you very much. Elegant is such a nice word. :)

musesfool December 27 2005, 14:33:08 UTC

Lovely and elegant - the words they speak and all the ones they can't, lying between them.

angelgazing January 4 2006, 07:20:49 UTC

Thanks, babe. I'm just glad you liked it.

laurificus December 27 2005, 15:06:05 UTC

I love this so much. It's beautiful and it hurts, and it's so very full of what could have been. Lovely.

angelgazing January 4 2006, 07:23:31 UTC

Well, I couldn't write it without it hurting, could I? lol Thanks, doll. ::air kisses::

amberlynne December 27 2005, 20:33:26 UTC

And Remus is covered in words, if you look right. In the right light, his fingers say grace. The soft underside of his jaw, rough with stubble at odd hours of the morning, where Sirius likes best to put his mouth, says hope. Remus' toes, curled against Sirius' shin, say comfort. The curve of his belly reads care, in soft, careful, curving letters. The places where Sirius can put his fingers and not be bitten by the sharpness of Remus' ribs through his skin, those say, yes. They say trust and happy, in the places where there's less hollow.

Oh you break my heart for both of them. It's so lyrical and sad. All the things they don't say that keeps adding up and it's a horrible train that isn't going to be stopped in time. *sigh* Beautifully done.

angelgazing January 4 2006, 07:26:30 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm happy that you liked it. :)