You Really Got a Hold On Me by crazylittleme

Dec 24, 2005 22:38

Title: You Really Got a Hold On Me
Author: crazylittleme
Summary: Harry is born, Sirius sits in laps, and eventually he and Remus have a Very Important Conversation on a park bench.
Rating: PG
Recipient: kasche
Notes: Thank you to The Beatles for the fic's song title! It came up on my playlist during the writing process and I couldn't resist. Anyway, happy holidays ( Read more... )

by crazylittleme, post-hogwarts, for kasche, su_sesa 2005, fic

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laurificus December 27 2005, 15:43:24 UTC
Hee. That's adorable. So very awkward and sweet.

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:07:03 UTC
Thanks for reading & reviewing! :D

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amberlynne December 27 2005, 16:52:55 UTC
Awww. I love the inner workings of Remus's mind. And Sirius is at once adorably spaztastic and oddly mature. Very nicely done. :)

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:07:37 UTC
Remus' mind is quite fun to play with. *G* Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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minnow_53 December 27 2005, 19:53:55 UTC
"Would she have all her toes?" Remus asked, trying to shove Sirius off his lap, at the same time Sirius nearly shouted, "Abigail?"

Peter looked rather hurt. "It's a nice name. I like it."

Witty and serious and entertaining. What more could you ask for? I really love the way you use Harry's birth to work backwards to an admission of love between R/S. Very accomplished.

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:08:35 UTC
Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Glad you liked. :)

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penknife December 28 2005, 14:06:29 UTC
Aww! This is wonderful. I love Sirius's flailing in this, and Remus attempting to hold onto the shreds of his dignity.

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:12:36 UTC
Sirius is an excellent flailer. Glad you enjoyed! :D

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:13:06 UTC
Remus is quite fun to write. :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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