Oh, this was so good. I loved the tension between Sirius and Remus. Though, perhaps, it wasn't given enough time to.. be resolved? The second part seems a little too quick (But still a lovely read!).
Hee! It probably feels a bit rushed (and probably was) because I was desparately trying to finish it for a challenge, but I'm glad you liked it anyway! :)
This is great - God, it makes you hate and respect Peter all the more. I loved your characterisation of Sirius and Remus. And it's always lovely to read stories where things didn't go as unbelievably awful for them as it did in canon.
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