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FIC: Mischief Managed (Part Two)

Nov 12, 2005 23:09

Part Two of Mischief Managed. Please see part one for all disclaimers and warnings.

( Mischief Managed (Part Two) )

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Comments 15

nogah November 13 2005, 01:10:48 UTC

*sniff* oh, this is amazing! I love it! I can't say coherent things right now, I am so sorry.

krabapple December 6 2005, 19:41:28 UTC

Oh, that's okay. :) Thanks for the lovely feedback!

kawamura_de_cat November 13 2005, 02:46:59 UTC

Oh, this was so good. I loved the tension between Sirius and Remus. Though, perhaps, it wasn't given enough time to.. be resolved? The second part seems a little too quick (But still a lovely read!).

krabapple December 6 2005, 19:42:08 UTC

Hee! It probably feels a bit rushed (and probably was) because I was desparately trying to finish it for a challenge, but I'm glad you liked it anyway! :)

liadlaith November 13 2005, 03:32:17 UTC

This is great - God, it makes you hate and respect Peter all the more. I loved your characterisation of Sirius and Remus. And it's always lovely to read stories where things didn't go as unbelievably awful for them as it did in canon.

krabapple December 6 2005, 19:42:35 UTC

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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krabapple December 6 2005, 19:42:52 UTC

Thank you! :)

nebt_het November 13 2005, 19:10:00 UTC

I really enjoyed this. Especially the way you used actual events from the book but with a different twist. And a happy ending! Good job.

krabapple December 6 2005, 19:43:09 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!