that could have been the beginning of the end if i wasn't already in the middle
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throughadoor thanks to
smartlikjustin,
rageprufrock and
circusgirl for beta action and to
semielliptical for the impetus. html version
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Good job. I don't know if I've said this before, but you are one of my favorite HP writers. I love your style, I love the way all the characters get their turn, and you are just a great writer. From one satisfied reader, thanks.
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Ok, wow. That was really good.
"I'm not deaf," Peter said, "and, er, both of you could stand to brush up on your silencing charms."
Remus' cheeks grew hot, and he very carefully studied the table, watching as the Chudley Canons' seeker allowed the Snitch to slip out of his grasp over and over and over again on the front page of the sports section.
"Don't worry," Peter said, "your secret is safe with me. You could have just told me, though. I'm your friend, aren't I?"
I absolutely love your Peter; best I've ever read. The whole Snape-finding-out-about-Remus being Peter's fault was a wonderful idea. And once again, Sirius takes the blame. You put the events together so well and I loved the different point of views. I can't express enough how much I enjoyed this. Thank you. *goes off to cry* ; ;
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also, james and sirius? er. oh dear. that's never been my way into things, but i guess it is sort of ... there.
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I liked Peter, as a character. And I adore Sirius taking the responsibility for him and then believing it so much that he really thinks that he was guilty. And I love Remus being able to tell.
Ah. That was just good.
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