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Fic: After the War

Aug 06, 2007 14:50

Title: After the War
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Word Count: 664
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: none specific, up to PoA at least (no DH spoilers)
Warnings: language, smoking, general dysfunction
Summary: There is no after. Only now. They have come, slowly, to understand this.
Notes: Cross posted to
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l_stone August 7 2007, 22:00:49 UTC

Thank you very much for the comment. The boys really do have the depressing past, don't they?

mindabbles August 7 2007, 06:18:19 UTC

This is so painful and beautifully done.

l_stone August 7 2007, 22:16:13 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it--even though S/R do have rather a painful history.

wanderlight August 7 2007, 23:59:05 UTC

Oh, this is heartbreaking, and the style works perfectly. ♥.

l_stone August 8 2007, 18:42:40 UTC

Thank you! It's a bit of an experiment in style; I'm glad you liked it.

secretsolitaire August 17 2007, 02:42:35 UTC

Gah. Beautiful and sad. Those last few lines are perfect.

l_stone August 18 2007, 23:02:23 UTC

Thank you for the comment. I had no idea how to end it, and I really wasn't sure the ending would work at all. I'm glad you liked it.

freudian_fuckup October 13 2007, 01:17:19 UTC

i honestly teared up a tiny bit.
so painful and tragic and beautiful, really well done.
and i love smoking!sirius... but i don't know why...

l_stone October 15 2007, 23:28:50 UTC

Thank you very much. I'm really touched that this story has had an effect on people.

Smoking!Sirius (and smoking!Remus, actually, though in a different way) is a definite kink of mine. I don't even know why, as I don't like smoking in real life that much--I think I just have very strong, not all negative, connotations associated with smoking that I like to connect with Sirius. Or something. At any rate, he really does smoke a lot in my fics.