House fanfiction: "Letting the Colors Lead You"

May 01, 2007 03:16

Title: Letting the Colors Lead You
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house fanfiction, colors, purple, smutathon

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sgr11 May 4 2007, 07:34:54 UTC
Yes, yes I was... ;) You know how I can get... besides it's been m~a~n~y months... I wasn't sure if it was flowing, if it was capturing the right things, if I could sell some of it... does that make sense???

it was fantastic, you captured the electricity between the two of them beautifully
Thank you so much. I'm really glad you thought so!

I liked the Cuddy part as for me, its what they are all about...
Yes! I like their friendship... glad you likey!

Bravo and congt=rats on a wonderful piece of writing!!
*bows* Many thanks for your comments. *hugs*
xo
S.

*icon love!*

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sgr11 May 4 2007, 20:22:12 UTC
*smooches*

xoxo
S.

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jovsg May 1 2007, 08:53:20 UTC
*stands up and applauds ( ... )

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sgr11 May 4 2007, 07:45:16 UTC
*stands up and applauds*
*giggles* *blushes* *bows* lol

BRAVO my dear! I literally squealed when I saw that you'd posted a fic after your respite and you did NOT disappoint. I can't believe you were worried about this.
You're so cute! LOL. Glad you squealed! It has been a long time! lol. Yes, so in a a way, I hope you can see why I was worried...

I have to let you in on a little secret. This is probably the first stand-alone one-part fic I've read since S3 started going to shit that had me excited about H/C and that really drew me in. There was such a realism to this that explained away House's internalized (was it?) stoicism and coupled it with exploring Cameron's indifference to Chase as anything but a sexual object.Wow, thank you for sharing that. I really appreciate it. I'm glad that you felt that way toward my little fic... that you looked forward to it... in some ways, it takes me so long to write things because I'm constantly processing things in my head how I can make them work... does that make sense? (Trust me, I' ( ... )

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chilibreath May 1 2007, 11:45:16 UTC
She posts a fic! Huzzah!

You didn't have anything to worry about, m'dear! This is fab! And Cuddy breaking into House's house? Revenge is good! Hee!!!!

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sgr11 May 4 2007, 07:47:08 UTC
She posts a fic! Huzzah!
She does! Finally! LOL! Pfft! Took the bitch long enough! lol

You didn't have anything to worry about, m'dear! This is fab!
Oh, but I did! it's been a long time! lol! I'm glad you liked it!

And Cuddy breaking into House's house? Revenge is good! Hee!!!!
Glad you liked! I thought it would be a way for her to turn the table a bit on him! ;)

*hugs*
S.

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ponks19 May 1 2007, 11:48:14 UTC
woohoo! Can't wait to read it!

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ponks19 May 1 2007, 12:26:24 UTC
two words: OH YEAH!

That was a wonderful fic! Your writing is so intense, I can sort of understand why you struggle to get your ideas out...but fear not, you will never disappoint. At least not me...a "bad" piece of your writing would still be 100X better than anything I could ever write.

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sgr11 May 4 2007, 07:52:31 UTC
two words: OH YEAH!
*laughs*

That was a wonderful fic!
I'm glad you liked it! took me long enough!

Your writing is so intense, I can sort of understand why you struggle to get your ideas out...but fear not, you will never disappoint. At least not me.
Why thank you so much. ...well, I haven't disappointed you yet... ;) Yeah, it takes me (sometimes) a long time to work some of these ideas out in my head so that I can write them/"sell them" - do you know what I mean? And thank you for thinking my writing is intense. *hugs*

a "bad" piece of your writing would still be 100X better than anything I could ever write.Are you sure??!? We're always our own worse critics! Trust me, I rarely think a piece I finish is good... or really even finished. There are few pieces that I have written that I don't feel feel the need to go back and tweak and try to make better... they all seem like WIPs in ways... you should give it a try ( ... )

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sgr11 May 4 2007, 07:48:13 UTC
*giggles*

you sound bubbling with enthusiasm...

I hope you remember the 'idea' or the fic you kind of asked for! ;)

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everknowledge May 1 2007, 11:54:09 UTC
Wow, this was so good. I loved the color imagery and the use of purple. Two things struck out at me above everything. The first was House calling her name and holding out his hand. It such an innocent gesture, but from House it's huge. The other was her saying to him to "stop thinking". House seems to always think he knows what others are thinking and that he is a locked booked. He's not and I like when Cameron shows him that. Well done, I adored this!

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sgr11 May 4 2007, 20:05:09 UTC
Wow, this was so good. I loved the color imagery and the use of purple
Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it and liked the imagery and coloring! ;)

Two things struck out at me above everything. The first was House calling her name and holding out his hand. It such an innocent gesture, but from House it's huge. The other was her saying to him to "stop thinking". House seems to always think he knows what others are thinking and that he is a locked booked. He's not and I like when Cameron shows him that. Well done, I adored this!
Thanks so much for pointing these out!! I was really worried the holding out the hand part wouldn't work, and in my mind it was such a focal point of the story... I'm really really glad you liked it! The second one came to me as I was writing it.

Thank you so much for your very thoughtful commentary. I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!

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