House fanfiction: "Have Your Cake and Eat It Too"

[sgr11]

Title: Have Your Cake and Eat It Too
Part 1 Part 2
Rating: MA/NC-17 - For Mature Audiences only... ;) (hehe)
Summary: House and Cameron have been dating for several months, now Cameron is going away for the weekend for her birthday with her friends, instead of spending it with how, and House starts to have suspicions about their relationship...

Comments

[phineyj]

Whee! I'm first (yeah, I had a tip off). It's for knitmi! That's so funny, I beta'd her one for Starhawk. Loved this, your jealous House rocks. Wilson was too funny, telling him how it was and then going "And don't ring back."

[sgr11]

*hugs you*

Love that you comment...even though you've read the story and made the edits... you just rock... have I told you that lately??

Thank you for liking the Wilson banter/conversation... I was kind of thinking of the recent conversation when he was telling him about the seven levels of happiness (or whatever) and he says to House 'I'm not going away' and keeps talking... besides, Wilson advice (as bad as it can be sometimes) just cracks me up... lol.

[treacle_a]

Yay...saturday morning fic. That's always the best way to start a weekend. Really enjoying thiis...onto part2.

[sgr11]

LOL. Hope you enjoy...

hope, I don't know that this is my favorite piece...I felt like I was kind of forcing it, and I see two or three holes I could of fixed, but it was already a week late..and I just wanted it done... you know? anyways... hope you like... esp. after reading this little commentary... lol

[starhawk2005]

Nice stuff!

Love House jumping to conclusions, that surreal nightmare....great stuff! ;)

[sgr11]

(catch up time! lol!>

Glad you likey!

Love House jumping to conclusions, that surreal nightmare....great stuff! ;)
Thankey! Glad it's working for you! ;)

[sgr11]

Hi there!! How are you?? Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to you! it's just been that kind of week!

EEE!!! You don't know how excited I was when I saw this posted!
Oh goodie! Sorry it took me so long!! I felt so bad! *hugs*

I really like the third person POV and present tense. I can't really describe it, but reading this story is almost like watching a movie.
Aw, thanks! Glad you think so! I went back and forth for a while, trying to decide if I should switch the POV to 'you' or not... so I'm glad you like! ;)

Your Jealous!House's thoughts and actions are very believable. I can almost picture him scowling.
Oh yay! Glad you think so! I was worried I wasn't writing him !jealous! enough! ;)

The House/Wilson banter is great. So perfect.
thanks! I love writing them talking together! ...some reason I can just hear them bantering! lol.

And the nightmare ... holy crap!
Glad you bought it! ;) Glad you seem to be enjoying so far! *yay! cheers!*

[alias_jems]

ok so i am only up to the House/Wilson phone call but i gotta reply now and say this is fantastic!!!!!!!!! and you said ur muse was awol!!! shame on you!! *grin*

what is so amazing about your stories is how spot on you are with the characters. not just cam and house but wilson - the speech in the dialogue is just as it would be in an episode - the phone call is just like a real scene from an episode - its untrue - you are a genius I swear. my fave bit is the yes you are but moving on - hilarious!!

And your descriptive stuff is amazing - reading House going over his relationship with Cam and his thoughts - it's just fab.

you are my hero and I am way too tired to go finish let alone read part 2 but i am gonna anyway and then i am gonna add to memories cos i adore this story already and i have no idea where it's heading :)

*just finished*

aww he's having bad dreams - wub - off to read part 2 :D

[sgr11]

Hi there! HOw are you? Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you! It's just been that kind of week!

ok so i am only up to the House/Wilson phone call but i gotta reply now and say this is fantastic!!!!!!!!! and you said ur muse was awol!!! shame on you!! *grin*
LOL! Well, I'm glad you're enjoying their banter! lol. I really liked writing them sometimes. And yes, seriously, the muse has really been awol for a while. honestly. i'm not lying. this took me f o r e v e r to write and at times i felt like i was really forcing it, i'm actually shocked that people are enjoying it. shocked!

what is so amazing about your stories is how spot on you are with the characters. not just cam and house but wilson - the speech in the dialogue is just as it would be in an episode - the phone call is just like a real scene from an episode - its untrue - you are a genius I swear. my fave bit is the yes you are but moving on - hilarious!!
Aw, thank you! you're so sweet! And too kind! I'm so glad you think so!

And your descriptive stuff is