Ooh! I'm first. Anyone would think I'd had a tip-off! Loved this, great imagery, and now you say Cameron's a gardener I like her even more! And poor Wilson, he always gets the fuzzy end of the lollipop!
"You just swallowed more pills. Some made you larger, some made you small."
Ooh! I'm first. Anyone would think I'd had a tip-off! Who would think that? ;) lol
Loved this, great imagery, and now you say Cameron's a gardener I like her even more! And poor Wilson, he always gets the fuzzy end of the lollipop! Glad you liked the imagery... and that Cam was a gardener here... it was a good thing I didn't have to delve much into the gardening stuff... I'd be screwed... lol... Yeah, Wilson got the fuzzy end, but he doesn't know what happened... and he did get involved with the woman House had a thing for...which we didn't even touch! You know?
"You just swallowed more pills. Some made you larger, some made you small." Very House. And nice 'Alice' reference. Thank you. Glad you liked... yes, very House.. ;)
Sexy! Hot! As if it wasn't already too hot in there. And lovely. LOL. Glad you think you so! Fan? ;)
I wasn't sure I got that right. Wait? Wilson/Cameron? Yes, you got it right. (I went back and adjusted the pairing to make it a little more clear in the story info). Yes, Wilson and Cameron living together.
After House was shot? how could they? But then, yes, I can totally get why she turned to him. House is, after all, a real bastard. Yes, after House was shot....long after House was shot... that's the assumption... that's why I said it's a little AU, looking far into the future... thinking that House tore her apart... maybe because of his increasingly drug dependence... that's what I was going for. It's a bit dark. How could Wilson & Cam... well, I barely even touched that here... that's a whole other can of worms! Thanks for commenting!
And I guess Wilson is someone you turn to once you've tried to love someone like Hpuse. Of course she's not in love with Wilson. Poor Jimmy :( He deserves better than being a second choice. He does deserve better... I think that's why she left.. when she realized what she had happened, when she realized that she loved House, when she realized that House was stoned and was never going to change...and either was she, not really.
That's something to apologize for? Nope, never! LOL! Well, the challenge was supposed to be 500 words... I think I was able to cut it down about 200 words... trust me, I could have fleshed this out a lot more! ;)
Omg, that ending! It was so sudden and unexpected! It had to be a twisted past.
Wonderfully written with the Alice in Wonderland metaphors, beautiful imagery, hot HOT smut, and angst. Great job! thank you so much! it wasn't what i had planned to write originally for the smut-a-thon, and it was hard to keep it short...but i'm glad you liked it! thanks so much for your thoughts and comments!
Whoa. Dark. Hot. Me likey. See me speaking in one word sentences. Nice. Cool. I like. ;) lol.
Yes, dark. It was hard to keep this piece short...it would have been easy to flesh this piece out more. this isn't what i originally intended for the smut-a-thon. but i'm glad you liked! ;)
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"You just swallowed more pills. Some made you larger, some made you small."
Very House. And nice 'Alice' reference.
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Who would think that? ;) lol
Loved this, great imagery, and now you say Cameron's a gardener I like her even more! And poor Wilson, he always gets the fuzzy end of the lollipop!
Glad you liked the imagery... and that Cam was a gardener here... it was a good thing I didn't have to delve much into the gardening stuff... I'd be screwed... lol... Yeah, Wilson got the fuzzy end, but he doesn't know what happened... and he did get involved with the woman House had a thing for...which we didn't even touch! You know?
"You just swallowed more pills. Some made you larger, some made you small."
Very House. And nice 'Alice' reference.
Thank you. Glad you liked... yes, very House.. ;)
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LOL. Glad you think you so! Fan? ;)
I wasn't sure I got that right. Wait? Wilson/Cameron?
Yes, you got it right. (I went back and adjusted the pairing to make it a little more clear in the story info). Yes, Wilson and Cameron living together.
After House was shot? how could they? But then, yes, I can totally get why she turned to him. House is, after all, a real bastard.
Yes, after House was shot....long after House was shot... that's the assumption... that's why I said it's a little AU, looking far into the future... thinking that House tore her apart... maybe because of his increasingly drug dependence... that's what I was going for. It's a bit dark. How could Wilson & Cam... well, I barely even touched that here... that's a whole other can of worms! Thanks for commenting!
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He does deserve better... I think that's why she left.. when she realized what she had happened, when she realized that she loved House, when she realized that House was stoned and was never going to change...and either was she, not really.
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That's something to apologize for? Nope, never!
Omg, that ending! It was so sudden and unexpected! Perfect.
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LOL! Well, the challenge was supposed to be 500 words... I think I was able to cut it down about 200 words... trust me, I could have fleshed this out a lot more! ;)
Omg, that ending! It was so sudden and unexpected!
It had to be a twisted past.
Perfect.
:) Glad you thought so! :)
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Good! ;)
Wonderfully written with the Alice in Wonderland metaphors, beautiful imagery, hot HOT smut, and angst. Great job!
thank you so much! it wasn't what i had planned to write originally for the smut-a-thon, and it was hard to keep it short...but i'm glad you liked it! thanks so much for your thoughts and comments!
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Cool. I like. ;) lol.
Yes, dark. It was hard to keep this piece short...it would have been easy to flesh this piece out more. this isn't what i originally intended for the smut-a-thon. but i'm glad you liked! ;)
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