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House fanfiction - It's all about the Sunday Morning Coffee

Jul 11, 2006 03:03

Title: It’s all about the Sunday Morning Coffee...
Author: sgr11Format & Word Count: ficlet / word count=2009 ( Read more... )

sgr11, house fanfiction, coffee fic, prompt 5

Comments 23

treacle_a July 11 2006, 12:19:16 UTC

I like this. I can see Cameron as a dancer and, more importantly, as a teacher of small children, I also buy that House would be a little turned on by it ;P I also think your second-person POV works very well in this, it seems to work even better for House than it does for Cameron in 'Tragic' (which really isn't a hint or anything :) )

One nigggle: you describe her as tall though...and lanky. I always think of Cameron as being really petite, maybe only 5'4' or 5'5"...

sgr11 July 11 2006, 16:32:53 UTC

Hi there...glad you like...

I also think your second-person POV works very well in this, it seems to work even better for House than it does for Cameron in 'Tragic' (which really isn't a hint or anything :) )hm, well, for some reason I'm on a House/POV kick... dont' know why. I have written him before (in some other fics, drabbles, etc.). I find him hard to write, I feel like I go back and forth from being somewhat serious to flippant and I don't think I can be as cerebal as he is. I think what has gotten extremely difficult and disappointing in 'tragic' is that we haven't heard House's POV at all, and Cameron has been very emotional and not very removed from her own life (at least recently) to see anything else around her. I have been contemplating writing the entire story again from House's POV, maybe I'll start planning that... I don't know.... funny what the difference might be. But regardless. I find him extremely difficult to write, and I don't think I do it particularly well. Perhaps I find it easier to write Cameron ( ... )

chmaresh July 11 2006, 15:00:43 UTC

This made me smile, a big ol' smile :)

The smell of fresh baking bread is wafting in the air, making everything feel like a country postcard
So vivid...

A patient goes into remission, gets all excited and huggy-and-lovey of Wilson, and opens a bakery-cafe to celebrate his second chance at life! What does he do? He calls Wilson with a big old invitation. What does Wilson do? Promise to be there on opening day in support! Of course!
LOL... And can House resist the promise of a free meal from Wilson? Of course not! :)

And I liked House's inner monologue, especially when he was laying on the charm with Cameron...

And good to hear that you survived your first week back at work!

sgr11 July 11 2006, 16:44:50 UTC

This made me smile, a big ol' smile :)
YAY! ;)

The smell of fresh baking bread is wafting in the air, making everything feel like a country postcard
So vivid...
Glad you liked... I was trying to throw in a bit of House-snark with the country postcard line too... ;) Perhaps I should have made it 'damn' country postcard.. lol

LOL... And can House resist the promise of a free meal from Wilson? Of course not! :)
Of course! Which he obviously ignores! :)

And I liked House's inner monologue, especially when he was laying on the charm with Cameron...
I'm glad you liked... I always worry about writing House...

And good to hear that you survived your first week back at work!
Thanks! *hugs* It wasn't so bad! It makes a big difference when you're feeling better, you know? I just wish I had more time to myself! NO LJ time or writing time :( sucks! ;) lol!

Hope all is well with you!

simply_inn0cent July 12 2006, 22:54:36 UTC

Ahh you sucker!! I was going to write a H/C Fic about Cameron doing ballet as well! hahaa oh well I like yours better =)

sgr11 July 13 2006, 03:08:56 UTC

Ahh you sucker!!
Sucker!??! ;) C'mon now!?!? lol

I was going to write a H/C Fic about Cameron doing ballet as well! hahaa oh well I like yours better =)
Aw, c'mon! DO it! Write it! I mean, I'm glad you like mine (Thank you, btw!)..it was an idea I've been tossing around for a little while, but I really know shit about dancing! I would love to see what you write! Do it anyway!! C'mon now! *will keep egging you on if necessary!* ;)

lady_hook July 14 2006, 07:37:02 UTC

Well, first of all hi!! :D
I just got to know about your fics of House from one of the communities you post them and so decided to keep an eye on your work and... so I'm here reading your fics at your lj :DD
I'm adding you also as friend to keep close to your recent works and see more of them
And now, let me say I like very much this one I've just read you keep the relationship between these two very special and warm. Great work!

blue_crystal_9 July 15 2006, 01:29:48 UTC

This was such a lovely fic. It gave me warm fuzzies. lol I've been reading some of your other fan fics also, and I just love your work. You have grasped Cameron's and House's characters very well. Also your fics have a certain tone that makes them so unique. I could see this type of thing happening on the show (hint hint David Shore! :D ) Your fics are probably my favorite ones. *gives you Sunday morning coffee and brunch* I can't wait to read more of your work!

sgr11 October 12 2006, 06:31:58 UTC

Hi Janelle! Again, another comment that I just stumbled across that I just realized I never replied to! My apologies! I'm so sorry, it's unlike me... I try my best to reply to all comments left for my fics, they really mean a lot to me...

This was such a lovely fic. It gave me warm fuzzies.
Thank you! I'm glad it gave you warm fuzzies! My intentions were met! ;)

I've been reading some of your other fan fics also, and I just love your work.
Thank you very much! I'm very glad that you like them! I hope that you continue to enjoy them! I hope to be writing more again soon... I'm just breaking out of a bit of a writer's block I was suffering :( now I'm just looking for time... (where does it go??).

You have grasped Cameron's and House's characters very well.
Thank you. I'm glad you think you! Sometimes they seem so hard to write! Especially House! And with Cameron and how much she seems to be changing this season, let's see if I can keep up! ;) lol

Also your fics have a certain tone that makes them so unique.Many thanks ( ... )

sgr11 October 12 2006, 06:18:51 UTC

Hi there! How are you? Someone just posted a comment here and I just saw yours and realized I never replied! Please accept my apologies! Somehow it slipped between my fingers! I hate when that happens!

I just got to know about your fics of House from one of the communities you post them and so decided to keep an eye on your work and... so I'm here reading your fics at your lj :DD
Well, I hope that you enjoy them.... and that you will let me know what you think... good or bad, I am open to all commentary!

I'm adding you also as friend to keep close to your recent works and see more of them
Okay, great! Now that I recognize your name, I will friend you back! I have been slacking a bit recently with writing, I have been suffering a writer's block that I am just starting to come out (I hope!), and now I'm just struggling to find some more time to write! (Where does it go??)

And now, let me say I like very much this one I've just read you keep the relationship between these two very special and warm. Great work!Thank you very ( ... )

brennamount October 11 2006, 16:24:15 UTC

How did I miss this?! I loved it... I always love it when Cammie takes House by surprise, and I could so see Cammie as a dancer. Wouldn't she look stunning in a ballet outfit as described?

I'm so glad I got to read this hun. I think you are one of the only ppl that can pull off the first person to such a point that I literally feel like I'm in their skin.

Wonderful job hun.

sgr11 October 12 2006, 06:11:46 UTC

Hi there!

How did I miss this?!
I think you were on your family business hiatus! ;) lol

I always love it when Cammie takes House by surprise, and I could so see Cammie as a dancer. Wouldn't she look stunning in a ballet outfit as described?
I could see her as a dancer too... Yes, I agree, I think that she would look stunning too! ;)

I'm so glad I got to read this hun.
Me too! Thanks for taking the time to comment on it! ;)

I think you are one of the only ppl that can pull off the first person to such a point that I literally feel like I'm in their skin.
WOW! Thank you so much! I was feeling a little iffy about this piece, because it is a bit AU, but it seems to liked, which is nice! And thank you for the above most lovely comment, you are too kind... I feel so grateful that you feel that way, and will treasure your comment...

Wonderful job hun.Thank you so much ( ... )