House/Cameron Ficathon - Scars - Proximity - Part 1

[sgr11]

Title: Proximity - in three parts:
1: First Dance
2: Cleaning Day
3: Salt Water and Wounds

Author: sgr11
Rating: a hard R, NC-17 scattered here and there
Beta: gabesaunt and lynettinspaghet - Very many thanks to both who looked at this last minute!! And big hugs to gabesaunt who helped me through my insanity! xo She deserves some cookies

Comments

[starhawk2005]

See, I KNEW you could do it! ;)

You can’t help it, but you spend the next hour masturbating into a back arching, mind-blowing orgasm, just over his smell

Mmmm, so tasty.

he’ll put down this good boy act he’s been playing with you for security and be himself for a bit, because you’re almost certain he’s been spanked before, even if he’s never told you that (yet).

*giggle* *has dirty thoughts*

Hawt. *thud*

What, there's more? *runs to read*

[sgr11]

See, I KNEW you could do it! ;)

LOL. It almost did not happen. I seriously (kid you not) started four fics. Wrote the last part to this on Wed night! Was making last minute edits Thursday night to EA could have it Friday AM before she left for vaca! (I felt so pressured by having to write a fic for her! lol!) But thanks!! xo *smooch*

Mmmm, so tasty.
*winks* thanks... may have been inspired by our conversation about some of our private time... not sure now... lol... (when i was feeling extremely gutterized, i think you were right, it must have been during ovulation! lol)

*giggle* *has dirty thoughts*
oh, c'mon...we know greggy has been a bad boy... ;)

Hawt. *thud*
What, there's more? *runs to read*
hehe... i like in-control cameron, no? ;)

[starhawk2005]

I seriously (kid you not) started four fics.

Eeeek. Ah well, the Muses get tired, it happens.

(when i was feeling extremely gutterized, i think you were right, it must have been during ovulation! lol)

Always works for me, heheh. ;)

oh, c'mon...we know greggy has been a bad boy... ;)

Oh, yes... *has even more dirty thoughts*

[snark_bait]

dude..HAWT...I don't think I've ever read so much PRON in one night!!! (damn you ficathon, in a good way) you have a beatiful writing style, and I love the little quirks you have in your writing, your stuff if very different to anything else H'C I've read, it's really fricken cool.

I'm soooo tired, but I cannot go to bed until I finish this fic...I hope you feel guilty *yawn*

[sgr11]

dude..HAWT...I don't think I've ever read so much PRON in one night!!! (damn you ficathon, in a good way)
uh oh! (I'm afraid to ask... i'm assuming you read lots of other fics too... lol)... i'm kind of wondering how you ended up sleeping last night?! ;) lol did you likey? hehe hey! don't damn my ficcy! ;) hehe

you have a beatiful writing style, and I love the little quirks you have in your writing, your stuff if very different to anything else H'C I've read, it's really fricken cool.
Aw, thank you! *hugs* That's so sweets of you. What kind of quirks do you mean? (I'm curious). But really, you're very kind. I'm extremely insecure about everything I write, so I am still shocked when I hear people say nice things, I feel like are they just saying that or do they really mean it? I know, it's horrible! Most importantly, I just really hoped y ou enjoyed it. But I am interested in what your thoughts are into what makes it different than other things you've read... curiousity, you know?

I'm soooo tired, but I cannot go to

[snark_bait]

friend away dude..and don't feel gulty (I've been averaging about 3 hours a sleep this week) so I did go to bed, but I'm back...first thing...blurry eyed and bushy tailed....not even had my breakfast yet...(although technically it's lunch time) *runs to read rest of ficlet*

[snark_bait]

That was absoloutly beatiful...lovely. I could really see it, the beach, the waves. You shouldn't worry about your writing, of what I've read so far you have a very specific writing style, very unique to anything else I've read. The quirks I was refering to are...stuff like...the bit about House comparing himself to a turtle, and having a spikey shell, you throw stuff in like that, at just the right moment, and it's awesome...what a great comparison, he is SUCH a turtle...slow walking perhaps, but a serioulsy tough outer shell. Dude, that was fricken awesome.
you are very talented, not just saying it, it's just fact.

[whitewriter]

In the 2nd person you are sooo in your element. In third peron, you are out of your element which makes you one weird puppy! ( I always thought most peopel were opposite)

He is scared of you, your sensitivity, your age, that you work for him, that you’ll leave him, that you’ll hurt him. He has a catalog of hurts written across his flesh that he slowly starts to display to you.

:::droool:::

so 100% better than your original attempt i must say CONGRATS ON A FANTASTIC FICATHON ENTRY !

[sgr11]

In the 2nd person you are sooo in your element. In third peron, you are out of your element which makes you one weird puppy! ( I always thought most peopel were opposite)
You would think! I can't seem to get out of it now! Which is really hard! And really hard to write in ways!

He is scared of you, your sensitivity, your age, that you work for him, that you’ll leave him, that you’ll hurt him. He has a catalog of hurts written across his flesh that he slowly starts to display to you.

:::droool:::

*giggle* glad you likey

so 100% better than your original attempt i must say CONGRATS ON A FANTASTIC FICATHON ENTRY !
Many thanks... I like this one... I like the last part the best... I think the other one has potential, but it wasn't finished and needed lots of edits! (And don't think this one didn't get them too! Well, except for last part! lol!) Hope all is well with you!

S.

[whitewriter]

Humm... I guess one could say all is well -- I went to an internet cafe to check out the late round offers for uni in aust and I find that I forgot that the site closes for maintance 12am to 7:30 am in aust .. which with the three hr time difference means _I have to come back here again_ *grrrr* ... stoopid brain...

but yes other than that all is well.:D ... who wishs she had time to read some fanfic or that it was cheap enough here to print out (50c a page is MURDEROUS!)

[pass_the_vics]

FINALLY. It took me forever to get around to start reading all the ficathon fics, and your's, of course, was on the top of my list. So here I am, ready to gush all over this part.

Just alone with your first paragraph and all those detailed desriptions you put me in the right frame of mind, beautiful.

pull the blankets over your head, and bake like a morning croissant for a few more hours.
I thought this line was adorable, I could so picture it. ;)

He started showing up at your apartment, knowing you were angry at him regarding the horrible date. He feigned excuses like his cable was out and you have satellite television, so he could watch some regionalized sporting events
This is SOOOOO House, made me laugh out loud. And the brunch? Brilliant. Of course he stayed ...

And uh, Cammie in control, yowza! I loved it. *fans self*

You write the second person POV so well, I'm always amazed at how good you
're at it *highfives*

Great part ... movin' on to the next...

[sgr11]

HI there...
And it's taken FOREVER for me to reply back to you! Hope all is well!

FINALLY. It took me forever to get around to start reading all the ficathon fics, and your's, of course, was on the top of my list. So here I am, ready to gush all over this part.
::hearts you:: ..for gushing... ;)

Just alone with your first paragraph and all those detailed desriptions you put me in the right frame of mind, beautiful.
Aw, thanks... sometimes I worry too much that I'm forcing it... thanks.

pull the blankets over your head, and bake like a morning croissant for a few more hours.
I thought this line was adorable, I could so picture it. ;)
*giggle* Glad you liked... I thought it may have bordered on lame, but I wasn't sure *laughs* but I just kept thinking of the folds of croissant and the bakery smells in the morning...

This is SOOOOO House, made me laugh out loud. And the brunch? Brilliant. Of course he stayed ...
hehe Thanks... :) Glad you liked the brunch too... :)

Cammie in control, yowza! I loved it. *fans self**hehe* (I

[pass_the_vics]

I thought it may have bordered on lame, but I wasn't sure *laughs* but I just kept thinking of the folds of croissant and the bakery smells in the morning...

It was soooooo NOT lame, really ... I thought that one was the cutest line in the fic (or at least one of them). Unless of course, if that was lame, then so am I *snort* ;P

*huggles*

[alias_jems]

holy crap - why have i not read this before.- it's amazing!!!!!!!!! like woah!!!! the build up and then the hot smutty sex - nobody writes a H/C sex scene like you - it gets me going crazy its so hot.

You write so beautifully - lines like You are wet, and you are about to break in a million pieces. are just too perfect. And I love how you know the characters so well - the scared lists are spot on!

And the sex -holy shit..................*head explodes*
and theres more - yippee...............................